The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the manufacture and exploitation of oil in one country from 1982 to 2006, with an interval of four years.
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, over the period, there
weren't
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were no
significant changes in oil production.
Although
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consumption had risen considerably, it led to its leadership. At the beginning, in 1982, two trends almost converged with a discrepancy of 0.1
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. From 1982 to 1990, consumption of oil barrels remained steady at 2
million
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per day,
while
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production over the first four years miserably went up. From 1986 to 1990, its line plateaued.
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, its amount hadn't been noticeably converted, except for a slight increase from 3 to 3.5 in total. After the steadiness of the consumption trend over 8 years, from 1990, it had dramatically shot up to 3.5
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and reached its highest point
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in 2006, with 6.5
million
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.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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