The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three dif erent areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph describes the exported
wheat
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in three different Countries from 1985 to 1990. From an
overall
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view, Canada exported the highest amount of
wheat
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,
while
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Australia
the
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exported the
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lowest
part
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amount
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of it. Looking at details, in 1985 Canada exported most
part
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apply
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of
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wheat
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the wheat
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(almost 19), if compared to
the
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apply
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other Countries.
Therefore
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,
this
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Nation had a slight decline
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until 17 in 1986, followed by a progressive rise until a peak (25) in 1988.
Thereafeter
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, in
1989
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1989,
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there was a
further
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decline
until
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to
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14 and
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apply
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a progressive
increase
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in 1990. European Community declined
wheat
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export from 17 in 1985 to 14 in 1986.
Thereafter
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, there was a slight
increase
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with a steady state until 1988.
Finally
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, there was a progressive
increase
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until 21 in 1990.
On the other hand
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, Australia had a slight
increase
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from 15 in 1985 to 16 in 1986. After that period of time, there was a progressive decreasing trend until 12 in 1990. It can be concluded that, European Community and Canada had similar trends
while
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Australia had an opposite one, over the same time period.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, increase with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • fluctuations
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • pattern
  • peak
  • noteworthy
  • consistency
  • stability
  • overview
  • analyze
  • summarize
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