The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the processing of rainwater collected and

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treated to be usable

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for humans in an Australian town.

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, the processing of

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through multiple stages ( collecting, storage,

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,and chemical

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, transferring through pipes), before being used as drinking

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in houses.

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, the rainwater falls down through pipes to drains.

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, the

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from rain and house drains passes across a

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filter tank, filtering

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from any dirt. After the filtering step, the

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is stored in a big tank. In terms of

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, after collecting

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in a storage, the

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undergoes a

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process. In the

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stage, the

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is treated with chemicals in order to be suitable for human use. In the

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stage, the

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becomes clean

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, and from the taps, people can use it as drinking

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. Ultimately, the clean

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travels through pipes to houses to be used.