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The graph demonstrates the proportion of French and English language teachers who secured regular employment in Ontario between 2001 and 2007.

The graph demonstrates the proportion of French and
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 who secured regular employment in Ontario between 2001 and 2007.
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 began at around 72
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 in 2001, after which it plummeted dramatically during 3 years. Meanwhile French
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 began their way from 70
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 and plunged into a huge dip during 2002, but
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 recovered in 2003. As for
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slight increase for 2 years
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 to around 44
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 in 2005. Focusing on French -
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, it showed moderate fluctuation from 2003 to 2006.
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 fell significantly again, where the percentage hit a low of about 28
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 in 2007. Regarding the French
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, it rose modestly and reached a peak at around 75
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 in 2007.
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 the employment
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 for French
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 fluctuated but remained generally high, the proportion of
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 experienced a significant decline over the period.

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