You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college adminisllator. In your letter • say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or

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I am writing

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letter to cancel my booking

regarding

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the particular course. My

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is 9900567

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am registered under

name

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the name

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Takdeer in

student

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the student

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portal. I had selected computer programming for

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summer intake with

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as Java ,HTML and

python

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Python

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. I was free

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summer and selected

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course as in person willing to commute and study.

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, I got

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week in Toronto

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it is

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great opportunity for me to work as

Java

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specialist in

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good firm.

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reason, I would request to cancel my booking.

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would be more beneficial for me if

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instead

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of refunding i can change my course to

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Java. As it is related to my work

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would learn alongside working. Your faithfulness Takdeerjot Kaur

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Mar 11, 2026

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Say the course name in a clear way at the start.

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Give a bit more detail about why you need to stop the course.

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Ask clearly if you can move to the new course and when it starts.

coherence and cohesion

Use clear paragraph order: course, reason, new course request.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words like also, so, and however.

coherence and cohesion

End the letter with the right close: Yours faithfully.

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You answered all three parts of the task.

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The reason for canceling is clear.

coherence and cohesion

Your ideas mostly follow a clear order.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has separate paragraphs.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

137 words

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