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from 2005 to 2025.

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, technology usage

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rose in all three devices over the twenty-year

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, with

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recording the most dramatic increase.

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computers figure

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reached

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peak in 2015 before declining slightly, the general

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remained

strongly upward across all devices. In 2005,

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had the highest

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at 55%,

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figure was considerably lower at just 5%. From 2010

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2015,

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the percentage of households owning smartphones

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rose most dramatically

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three-quarters

, meanwhile

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reached

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of households owning computers reached

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its peak at 75%. In 2020,

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overtaked

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at 85% and became the highest

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, by the beginning of the

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, smart tv’s

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was zero.

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it increased sharply throughout the

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, smart tv’s

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reached at 75% in 2025. By the end of the

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the highest

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at 95%, followed by smart tv’s at 75%,

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stood behind at 68%.

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Mar 19, 2026

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The line graph below shows the percentage of households owning three types of technology — computers, smartphones, and smart TVs — in the United Kingdom between 2005 and 2025.

It is often said "when is Rome, do as the Romans do". Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they are visit? do you think it is possible to learn a culture without learning the language?

Spending money on luxury items or special occasions is very expensive. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both opinion and give your own opinion.