Mrs. Barette, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barette. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not available

Hi Mrs Barette, As per your advertisement for finding someone to work in your home for a few hours next summer, I am writing

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letter for your consideration because I am interested. I would like to do

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work because I have been doing houseworks e.g. cleaning, laundry, mowing, etc.

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Apart from that, I am able to lift more than 20 kilograms of weight

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you would like me to move the furniture or rearrange things, I would

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be able to do that. I

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know how to plant the trees and arrange the flowers. Regarding

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the location and my availability, I live

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3 blocks away from you, so

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it is easy for me to get there. I am usually available from 8AM to 12PM daily for 3 weeks, and after 12PM, I will need to do another job. Only on weekends when I would be available for the whole day. Once my school starts, I will be available only after 4PM. If you would like more information, I have left my contact details in

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email. Phone number: 040 888 9999 Your Sincerely, Anna

patt.rusrin

Mar 29, 2026

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Answer all three points more clearly. Say exactly what work you can do, why you want it, and your free time.

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Use a more polite letter style. Write 'Dear Mrs Barette' and end with 'Yours sincerely'.

coherence and cohesion

Put one main idea in one paragraph. This will make your letter easier to read.

coherence and cohesion

Use linking words like 'also', 'because', 'however', and 'on weekends' in a simple way.

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You covered the main points from the task.

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Your time and work details are clear in many parts.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a clear start and end.

coherence and cohesion

Most ideas follow a logical order.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

191 words

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