The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information tlecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rele ant.

The bar chart illustrates the highest countries for the
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and
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of electricity in the year of 2014.
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,in the figure, China was in the highest ranking over the shown period of
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and
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, the United States was the second highest in the
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of electricity and the
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. At the time,Russia and Japan were stable over the period, India and Canada's
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decreasedconsumption decrased the most compared to the highest ranking countries. France,Brazil,Germany and Korea had the lowest
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and
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. China showed an increase over the period by twice, with an average of 5,398
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production
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and 5,322
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consumption
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.
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,
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, the United States decreased gradually by 4,099
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per
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kWh
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and
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the
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was 3,866
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,
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By contrast
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, the
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of Russia and Japan had declined by more than half of their
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and
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.
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India, Canada, and France had fallen from 618.9
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of
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and 462,9
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of
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,
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. Brazil ,Germany and Korea decreased the same in both
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and
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, per 530.7
kWh
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.

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