The chart below shows the percentage in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart compares the proportion of international
graduates
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in eight different Canadian provinces in the years 2001 and 2006.
Overall
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it is clear that
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every province experienced an increase in the percentage of international
graduates
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over the five-year period. New Brunswick consistently recorded the highest figures,
while
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Ontario consistently had the lowest share of international students. In 2001, New Brunswick led with approximately 7% of
graduates
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coming from overseas, followed closely by Nova Scotia and Quebec at around 6%.
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, the remaining five provinces all fell below the 5% mark, with Ontario and British Columbia recording the lowest proportions at roughly 3% and 4%
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. By 2006, the figures had risen significantly. New Brunswick remained the leader, with its share of international
graduates
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climbing to nearly 12%. Interestingly, British Columbia saw the most dramatic growth, with its percentage more than doubling to reach over 10%. Nova Scotia
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surpassed the 10% threshold. Meanwhile,
although
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Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Ontario
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saw increases, they remained the provinces with the lowest proportions, each staying below 7%.

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