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The table below shows causes of injuries in Australia for teenagers and the general population. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant. Teenagers and the total population: rates of certain injuries Males aged Females Total Total 13-19 aged 13-19 aged 13-19 population Cause rate(a) rate(a) rate(a) rate(a) Total transport accidents 779 323 557 305 Car occupant 232 186 210 124 Motorcyclist 230 20 127 59 Pedal cyclist 210 24 120 45 Pedestrian 46 26 36 30 Falls 720 193 463 843 Complications of medical care 340 349 344 1431 Assault 281 80 183 119 Accidental poisoning 68 95 82 85 Exposure to heat, smoke, fire 54 17 36 42 All cases (b) 3688 1765 2750 3712 (a) Cases per 100,000 of this group. (b) All cases, includes causes not listed. Some cases can involve more than one cause. Test 4 11 5

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The table shows the causes of
injuries
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 in Australia among
teenagers
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 and the general
population
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. It compares
rates
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 for
males
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 aged 13–19,
females
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 aged 13–19, all
teenagers
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, and the total
population
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. The
rates
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 are measured per 100,000 people.
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, transport accidents and falls were major causes of
injuries
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 among
teenagers
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,
while
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 complications of medical care and falls were much higher in the total
population
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. Male
teenagers
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 generally had higher injury
rates
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 than
females
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 in most categories. For transport accidents, the
rate
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 for male
teenagers
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 was 779
cases
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 per 100,000, compared with 323 for
females
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. Motorcyclist and pedal cyclist
injuries
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 were especially high among
males
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, at 230 and 210
respectively
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,
while
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 the figures for
females
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 were much lower. Car occupant
injuries
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 were
also
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 common in both groups. Falls were another important cause of injury, particularly for
males
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, with a
rate
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 of 720, compared to 193 for
females
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.
However
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, in the total
population
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, falls reached 843
cases
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, making it one of the highest
overall
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 categories. Complications of medical care had the highest
rate
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 in the total
population
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 at 1431
cases
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 per 100,000,
while
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 the
rate
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 among
teenagers
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 was much lower at 344. Assault
rates
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 were
also
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 noticeably higher among teenage
males
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 than
females
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.
Overall
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, the total injury
rate
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 for
teenagers
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 was 2750
cases
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, slightly lower than the general
population
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 figure of 3712.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 89%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words injuries, teenagers, population, rates, males, females, rate, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 4 times.
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