You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope. Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter: explain why you are writing express concern about the missing card ask them what they intend to do You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well

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I am writing

this

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letter in regards to the

the

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letter that I

recieved

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received

yesterday from the

bank

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requiring the acknowledgement of

reciept

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receipt

new

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the new

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card

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. Unfortunately, I regret to inform you that I have not

recieved

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received

the

card

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. The envelope in my mailbox was empty

and

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, and

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card

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the card

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was missing

, nobody

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. Nobody

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has access to my mailbox except me. It must have been a mistake on the

bank

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's part, as there was just a letter and

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card

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the card

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was absent. I am concerned about the missing

card

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as my

bank

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account is linked with it

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I would immediately like to block the

card

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that was sent by the

bank

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. I would like an investigation

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into

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this

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matter from the

bank

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and get

the

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clarity on the situation. I would

also

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like to be informed whether I would be

recieving

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receiving

a different

card

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again

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and

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how

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, how

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long it might take to arrive

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my mailbox? I am

genuienly

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genuinely

concerned as I need the

card

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to make

purchase

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for my daily routine. I hope your staff takes action on

this

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matter. Sincerely, Cut

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May 29, 2026

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task response

Task response: You answer all parts of the task, but some ideas need to be more clear and more exact.

task response

Task response: Say clearly what action you want, like stop the card and send a new one soon.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear order, but some long lines should be split to make reading easier.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: Use simple linking words like 'First', 'Also', and 'Please' to join ideas better.

task response

Task response: You explain the problem, show worry, and ask what the bank will do.

coherence cohesion

Coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

189 words

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