The chart below gives the information about science qualification held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below
shown
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shows
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the data about
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scince
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science
certificates
which are holding
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held
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by Malaysian and
Singaporean
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Singaporeans
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.
Overall
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, from the comparisons none qualification is on top of
chart
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the chart
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.
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,
lowest
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the lowest
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Master's
degree
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.
Moreover
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, both countries are holding students who are school leaving exam. Either
,
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apply
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on
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a
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Bachelor's
degree
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. On the
otherhand
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other hand
, in
Malaysia
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Malaysia,
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65 per
cent
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of their ciitizen are noe certification on
scince
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. Despite
of
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the
,
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5 per
cent
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on Master's
degree
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and more than 35 per
cent
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who are
school leving
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school-leaving
exam.
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, 10 per
cent
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on
Bachelor's
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a Bachelor's
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degree
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within
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scince
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science
qualification.
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,
singaporean
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Singaporeans
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are 60 per
cent
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on
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apply
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not qualified on
scince
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.
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, 5 per
cent
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on
Master's
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a Master's
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degree
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same as
Malaysian
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in Malaysia
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. As long as
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30 per
cent
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on leaving and 20 per
cent
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on Bachelors.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • qualification
  • science
  • people
  • country
  • degree
  • diploma
  • certificate
  • number
  • compare
  • difference
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trends
  • education
  • job
  • market
  • system
  • total
  • percentage
  • feature
  • report
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