You have had a problem with your neighbor for the past few months. You have not been able to meet with your neighbor to discuss the problem. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: - Explain the problem Suggest a solution -Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve
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Dear xyz,
I hope you are fine. I was
bit
busy Correct article usage
a bit
from
Change preposition
for the
last
few days, Linking Words
Linking Words
that
is why I could not meet you,Correct pronoun usage
which
Linking Words
while
I Correct word choice
although
planned
many Verb problem
had planned
time
. My working hours Fix the agreement mistake
times
are
Wrong verb form
have
changed
so I have to wake up early to manage Punctuation problem
changed,
for
my work.
Since Change preposition
apply
last
Linking Words
month
Punctuation problem
month,
me and my whole family is
suffering, as we both are Correct word order
my whole family and I have been
Correct determiner usage
both professionals
professionals
so our day is quite busy, we only have evening time to Punctuation problem
professionals,
spent
Wrong verb form
spend
together with
Linking Words
kids
. The problem is the loud music voice Correct article usage
the kids
bother
us a lot. You know my old mother is with me and she Correct subject-verb agreement
bothers
need
rest, as her health is not allowing her to stay up late at night. Continues laughing and the noise of Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
foot steps
disturbs us, and we are not able to sleep properly at night. I suggest you Correct your spelling
footsteps
to
reduce your activities and please keep Wrong verb form
apply
it
lower after Fix the agreement mistake
them
certain
time or continue your activities on weekends only.
I hope you will think about it and reduce your activities. If the problem continues, I will report it to the building management and authorities.
Your Neighbour
JhfigvmhCorrect article usage
a certain
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task response
Task response: You answer all parts, but some ideas are not fully clear. Say the problem, the fix, and the next action in a more direct way.
task response
Task response: Use a polite but clear tone. Some lines sound a bit hard, so make the request more calm and simple.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Your letter has a clear start, middle, and end, but some sentences are long and not easy to follow.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: Put one main idea in one part. First say why you write, then the problem, then the solution, then the warning.
task response
Task response: You cover the problem, give a solution, and say what you will do next.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and cohesion: The letter form is good, with a greeting and a closing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,