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You have to receive this email from who you want to collage with. Do you know it will be five years since we finished college ? i think we should contact our friends and arrange to meet again.Have you got any ideas about what we could do to celebrat e and when? write an email to jan : suggest a good way to celebrate with your old college friends explain when would be the best time for the celebrate offer to help organise the celebrate

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Hi Jan, Hope you are doing well. It is nice to
here
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hear
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 from you that we are going to arrange our meetup because it's
been already
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already been
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 five years
that
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since
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 we
didn't
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last
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 met
to
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with
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 any of our old
collage
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college
 friends. So,
Let's
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let's
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 arrange the meetup in one of
good
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the good
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 and quite restaurant where we can talk easily
and
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, and
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eveyone
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everyone
 can enjoy.
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, let's schedule
this
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 for September, when everyone is back from their summer vacations and the school year has started for those with children.
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, I have so many ideas for what we can do
,
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apply
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 when we
will met
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meet
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. I will let you know
that
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at that
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 time. Let me know if you need any help to book restuarant. I have contact numbers of so many old friends, let me know if you want
that
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. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts. Best wishes, Zara

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Answer all parts more fully. Say how you will celebrate, when, and how you will help.
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Give one or two clear details, like the place, time, and plan for food or games.
coherence and cohesion
Keep your ideas in a clear order: start, plan, time, help, end.
coherence and cohesion
Use words like first, also, because, and so to join ideas better.
coherence and cohesion
Check each sentence so the meaning is clear and easy to follow.
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You answer the email in a friendly way.
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You give a place and a good time for the meeting.
coherence and cohesion
The email has a clear start and end.
coherence and cohesion
Most ideas stay on the same topic.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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