Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plan illustrates the landscape development of Tarnagul between 1900
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and 2000.
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, Tarnagul small
town
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, developed and added some facilities until 2000,
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it destroyed some places. Despite some changes, the river and the
road
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stayed unchanged. In 1900, the place for dairy was on the left
side
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of the river. In the middle, there was a
town
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area which was divided by a
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that ran from the west
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to the east
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of the layout. Oranges and mandarin gardens are located in the north and south of the
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area.
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, within fifty years, dairy was demolished in order to build lemons and grapefruit facility.
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the Mandarins
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destroyed the oranges again once.
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the
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area expanded, and built packing sheds, and a
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for
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, which was located on the east
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of
town
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. turning to 2000, Lemons and the grapefruits were replaced with the Wildlife Sanctuary. Whilst the twice-Oranges were
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removed, and stayed unused.
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, the park was added beside unused land in the south of the
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.
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the destroyed packing sheds were used
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the local museum and the craft market.
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such
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changes occurred, the
road
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and river stayed unchanged.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, although, however, while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • infrastructure
  • land use
  • agricultural
  • residential
  • commercial
  • population growth
  • urban sprawl
  • modern amenities
  • environmental changes
  • town expansion
  • character
  • features
  • comparative analysis
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