The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates an industrial site located in Norbiton's planned improvement to the section for the foreseeable future.

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, the project aims to transform the place from an industrial town to a more lively and commercial space.At the moment, the town consists of only factories. The farmland is to the north, right across a river stream.For the future development plan, there are several changes to accommodate housing and facilities for people.

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, the factories are to be demolished for new construction and building projects. There is an addition of a roundabout to the previous one ,which provides access to different routes and destinations. Along the roundabouts, there is a medical centre and shops. To the East of the centre resides a playground

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followed by a school

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. The houses are scattered along the side of the routes. On the west of the

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nears the shops,

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more estates;

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there is a bridge built connecting the 2 sides above the river.

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leads to more estates that take up a part of the farmland.