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The chart below show the leverage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relavent

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A glance at the pie chart provides the percentage of
water
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 consumption for different purposes, including industrial, agricultural and domestic
use
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, in six different
areas
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 around the world,
such
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 as North
America
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, South
America
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, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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.
Overall
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, the majority of the
areas
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uses
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use
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 most of
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water
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the water
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 in the
agriculrural
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agricultural
 industry.
According to
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 the information shown on the chart, South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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 and South East
Asia
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 mainly focus on agricultural
use
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,
while
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 North
America
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 and Europe
empahsise
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emphasise
 on industrial
use
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. What should be particularly mentioned is that South
America
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 uses 19% of
water
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 in domestic
use
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, which is the highest among the
mentioned six
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six areas mentioned
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areas
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.
On the other hand
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, above half of the
water
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 consumption in Europe is consumed in industries. In conclusion, the pie charts
reveals
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reveal
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 the developmental focuses across the six
areas
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 through the allocation of
water
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 resources.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, areas, america, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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