In some nations, parental leave is a constitutional right for
who have given birth during the first months after their babies are born.
it has some downsides, for parents and their
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health, the upside,
as preserving their health and lowering their
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is fueled by their jobs, can be far greater than reducing their chances of being hired because of
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career gap.
essay will elaborate on both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, one of the advantages of taking parental leave for
is that
life is a catalyst, causing high
levels and the possibility of catching an illness.
is because
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they are exposed to a high workload, forcing them to complete their tasks simultaneously
they are trying to care for their
. These multitasks cause an increase in their
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to feeling fatigue.
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, they
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their attention for the meeting.
, they feel insufficient not only for
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but
for their
, leading to
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, increasingly
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easily an ilnnes particularly in the winter.
, there is a strong link between parental leave and well-being because they capture the synergies
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other.
, one of the drawbacks of parental leave is that
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career gaps
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chances of being hired by a company. The reason is that comapnies seeking a person who can
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long term without any probability of leaving or missing
. Given that reason, they see a woman who can potentially leave the job
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birth. To illustrate, there is a general belief that some companies prefer male managers for leading positions because they think that these men can
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employees.
In conclusion,
taking maternity leave has some downsides, I firmly maintain that
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a significant number of opportunities for parents, allowing them to spend more time on taking care of their
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from any illness.