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The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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 information about a public library in a city
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called Little Charfont. The
member
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members
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 of
library
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the library
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is
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 mostly compose by Adults. It is around
in
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half, the rawest is adults 65 and over. Fiction is the most popular category
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for both
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 children
or
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and
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 adults. Both of them are recorded by 38%.
Wheras
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 nonfiction is less popular than fiction. It is 13% and 6% for children. The visualisation's categories,
such
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 as DVDs and audio
books
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books,
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 are lowest in the same binding
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, which
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 is
total
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the total
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 number of loans. The bar is starting
as
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at
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 the lowest in 2007. It is about 15,000.
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,
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it
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 has been slowly
rised up
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rising
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 until 2011. Unfortunately,
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it
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 is likely to decrease
as
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from
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 2009
during
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to
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 2012 to 2013.
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,
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it
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 has been surprisingly increased by 2016. In 2016, It break new record
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in
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 the chart. It could be about 21,000!

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overall
  • in general
  • the most
  • the least
  • higher
  • lower
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • drop
  • share
  • number
  • rate
  • group
  • age
  • men
  • women
  • books
  • children
  • adult
  • more than
  • less than
  • about the same
  • compared with
  • while
  • whereas
  • accounted for
  • made up
  • remained stable
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