You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my satisfaction with the services I received at your hotel

last

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weekend.

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, I will want to appreciate the effort that you and your staff put into ensuring that your guests have a splendid stay. The professionalism of your workers is the best that I have seen in

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a while

, right from the receptionist who was welcoming and calm, to the waiters who were very patient, friendly and respectful.

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, the room attendants were very polite and attended to all my needs without any mistakes.

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, I had to write a review on the experience I had during my stay in your hotel on Google

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I want visitors to be aware that an

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exquisite

hotel can be found in the region, and for them to visit and get an

exprience

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experience

of luxury. I hope to visit some other time. Yours faithfully, Lina Onoja.

paulinaonoja2016

Jul 16, 2026

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Add one more clear reason why the stay was great, like the food, room, or place.

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Say more clearly that you wrote the review on a travel website.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple link words like First, Also, and Finally to make ideas flow better.

coherence and cohesion

Keep one main idea in each paragraph.

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You thanked the manager and staff in a clear way.

coherence and cohesion

Your letter has a clear opening and ending.

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You gave some good examples about the staff.

coherence and cohesion

The ideas are easy to follow most of the time.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

154 words

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