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The chart below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by Canada, UK, USA and Germany in 2007 in tonnes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. write 150 words.

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The bar chart compares the values of
tea
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 and
coffee
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imports
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 in 4 different countries through 2007. The units are measured in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, the United Kingdom registered the highest number of
tea
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imports
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 throughout the
year
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,
whereas
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Canada
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 and the United States posted the lowest share. Unlike
this
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countries
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country
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,
Coffee
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imports
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 constituted the highest proportion of
imports
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 in Germany.
Although
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 the US and
Canada
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 registered lower values on
Coffee
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imports
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, the UK recorded the lowest proportion in the surveyed
year
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. The British
imports
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 for
tea
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 were by far the most popular product imported, reaching 80,000
tonnes
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 in the surveyed
year
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.
In contrast
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, both the United States and
Canada
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,
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apply
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 recorded just 20,000
tonnes
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 over the
year
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of
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apply
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2007,
while
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 Germany experienced a relatively higher proportion, with 40,000
tonnes
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 of
tea
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 imported.
On the other hand
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,
Coffee
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 represented the highest number of
imports
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 in Germany, registering 50,000
tonnes
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unlike
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, unlike
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 the United Kingdom, whose
coffee
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imports
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 reached just 30,000 and
remaining as
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remained
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 the lowest share of
coffee
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imports
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.
However
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,
Canada
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 and the United States registered a
slighly
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slightly
 higher number of
coffee
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imports
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 with 40,000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, imports, tonnes, year, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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