The given line graph illustrates the percentage of electronic device
access
in the United Use synonyms
kingdom
from 1996 to 2003.
Capitalize the proper name
Kingdom
Overall
, CD player is accounted for Linking Words
largest
Correct article usage
the largest
share holder
in all the years Correct your spelling
shareholder
and
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, and
their
is Use the right word
there
fluchuation
between home computer and mobile phone. They is no internet Correct your spelling
fluctuation
access
at first two years Use synonyms
and
from 1998 network witnessed a steady growth.
Looking at the data in detail, CD player usages around 60% in Punctuation problem
, and
year
1996/1997 and by 2002/Correct article usage
the year
2003
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2003,
access
increased to more than 80%. Home computer was availability was slighty rosed all the years from 30% to under 60%.
Use synonyms
Turnning
to others, early 1996 Correct your spelling
Turning
moblie
phone usage was below 20% and between 1998/1999 Correct your spelling
mobile
was
overtook Correct pronoun usage
it
the
computer Correct article usage
apply
access
. By 2002/2003 Use synonyms
moblie
usage was 70%, just under the CD player. Their is no internet till 1998 Correct your spelling
mobile
and
from Punctuation problem
, and
then
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internet
using was dramatic rising fro 10% to around 45% by the end of 2003.Change preposition
on, internet