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The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.

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The table below gives information about the USA's top exports in 2021 and the percentage change with 2020. The bar chart shows the percentage of the USA exports sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020.
The table illustrates the USA’s top
exports
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 in 2021 and the percentage change from 2020,
while
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 the bar chart gives information about the proportion of the USA’s
exports
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 sent to the UK between 2010 and 2020, expressed in percentages.
Overall
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, it is evident that the proportions of
exports
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, including electric vehicles, gold, jets, and petroleum, reduced in 2021,
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 the percentage of
exports
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 of medication slightly increased.
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, the share of the USA
exports
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 experienced a steady decline between 2010 and 2020.
According to
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 the USA’s top
exports
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 in 2021, electric vehicles ranked the first product at 28
bn
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,
although
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 the share of it decreased by 40% compared with 2020.
Following
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this
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, gold and jets were the next goods at 20.1
bn
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 and 20.5
bn
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 respectively,
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 the percentage of them reduced by 10% and 20% compared with 2020. Medication
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 numbered at 19.1
bn
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, despite a moderate increase by 1.5%.
By contrast
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, petroleum ranked the least at 17
bn
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 with 32% reduction in
exports
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 compared with 2020. Concerning the USA
exports
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 sent to the UK, the share experienced a constant fall, reducing from 60% to around 40%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, bn with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • percentage change
  • data presented
  • timeframe
  • highlighting
  • significant
  • analysis of trends
  • patterns
  • correlation
  • demand
  • potential reasons
  • economic factors
  • political factors
  • social reasons
  • speculation
  • export landscape
  • global events
  • pandemic
  • influenced
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