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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.Highest production in 1985: United States (1,200 MW). Highest production in 1990: United States (1,650 MW). Highest production in 1995: United States (1,600 MW). Highest production in 2000: Denmark (1,650 MW). Largest overall increase: Denmark, from 250 to 1,650 MW. Lowest production in 2000: Germany (900 MW). General trend: All four countries recorded higher production in 2000 than in 1985, although US production declined after 1990.

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The bar chart illustrates how much
energy
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 was produced by wind across four countries, India,
Denmark
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,
Germany
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 and the United
States
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 between 1985 and 2000. Units are measured in megawatts.
Overall
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, the United
States
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 recorded the highest level of
energy
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production
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 over the years, peaking at around 1650
MW
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 in 1990, the same figure as
Denmark
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 in 2000. In fact, 2000 was the year which witnessed the highest level of
energy
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production
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 among the four countries, with
Denmark
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 recording the highest figure, amounting to around 1650
MW
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, followed by the United
States
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, standing at approximately 1500
MW
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, by India at 1200
MW
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, and, ultimately, by
Germany
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, which accounted for the country with the lowest
energy
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production
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, standing at around 900MW.
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,
whereas
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 India,
Denmark
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 and
Germany
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 have undergone a steady increase over the period, the United
States
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 has recorded a more fluctuating trend in terms of
energy
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production
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, as it went from 1200
MW
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 in 1985 to peak at approximately 1650
MW
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 in 1990 to
then
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 falling by around 50
MW
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 in 1995 and nearly by 100 in 2000.
Germany
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,
on the other hand
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, was the country with the lowest growth
of
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energy
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 over the years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, denmark, germany, states, production, mw with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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