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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

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The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
The bar chart reveals the share of male and female candidates passing driving exams in Asia across three decades
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 from 1980 to 2010.
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, the trend is quite clear
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 women have been far more successful in the examination than men, across all four periods.
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, the success rate fluctuated for both genders during the
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 timeline. Importantly,
pass
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 rate for women slightly increased in 1980-1990, from aroung 48% to over 50%. Sharp increased
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in 2000, with a jump of almost 20%. At the same time, male drivers' test results improved
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by around 10% each decade. On
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opposite dynamics were tracked in 2010 - both genders' results didn't see growth, with female test
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 even decreasing during that time. In the meantime, male drivers passed the test
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 in 2000.

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