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To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000. Describe the information in the graph.

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To the right is a line graph which shows the number of farms and farm workers in the United States from 1910 – 2000. Describe the information in the graph.
The line graph illustrates the number of farms and farm
workers
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 in the United States from 1910 to 2000, expressed in millions.
Overall
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, it is evident that the numbers of both farms and farm
workers
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 experienced reductions over the period, with a substantial decline in the
figure
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 for
workers
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. Regarding the number of farms, the
figure
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 slightly increased from around 6.1
million
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 to 6.5
million
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 between 1910 and 1935, before significantly decreasing to approximately 2
million
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 in 1990. Afterwards, it remained largely unchanged until 2000.
However
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, the number of farm
workers
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 moderately decreased from around 13.5
million
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 to 12.3
million
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 between 1910 and 1930, after which it rose to 13
million
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 in 1935.
Thereafter
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, the
figure
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 considerably declined to 10
million
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 in 1945 and remained unchanged until 1950.
Following
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this
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, it sharply fell to around 4.2
million
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 in 1970, and
then
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 it steadily decreased to around 2.5
million
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 in 1990.
Finally
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, the
figure
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 ended at around 2.7
million
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 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, figure, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • steadily declined
  • sharp decrease
  • fluctuated
  • peaked
  • plateaued
  • consistent downward trend
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • notable increase
  • plunge
  • coincide
  • drastically
  • proportionally
  • trends
  • timeline
  • significant change
  • marked difference
  • fell dramatically
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