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Some people believe that what children watch in television influence on children's behaviour. Others say that amount of time on television influence their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today we live in technological era there are plethora of technological gadgets have been made for childrens. In this essay some people opine that, children behavior depends on how kind of programs and show on television and other people opine that there are several effect on children behavior though show long time television programes. I will give my opinion in conclusion
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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a growing consensus among many people that individual photographers should not follow famous personalities and interfere in their personal life by capturing them private photographs. While others opine that is the price of being famous. In my opinion, the chasing of photographers for celebrities is an expected situation of fame.
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Introduce yourself and what you want to accomplish in your life?

Hello, how are you all I'm fine hope so your are too let me introduce myself my name is sheeraz ahmed I'm from Pakistan I've done my graduation from international university Islamabad in BBA hons and my specialization in Marketing after my graduation recently i joined banking sector which is also my dream to join. Furthermore i started my career since 2018 to till as a customer service officer i got learned alot from my job area...
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some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in despite of great responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that being teeneger is one of the most fascinating part of the life.In contrast,while some argue that adulthood is brought happy moments compared to teenage years, I support those who think that teenager life is beautiful because this period of life has minimum responsibilities and obligations.
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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

In todays life, children are becoming more stubborn so , to teach them parents need to take some action. I am 70 percent disagree with the statement that says teachig forcefully by slaping or scolding is the best way to teach discipline. Below is the explanation to support my words.
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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

In this today's world, the thechnology usage has risesd because it is now available easily in the means of different type of programs. Some peopel use this invention for the safety of their loved ones. But we should not forget that in many case this is being used unknowingly on other people.So, i strongly believe that the pros of this never overcome its cons. Below are the further explanations to support my statement.
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In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse/ What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could be taken to solve it?

It is argued by some people that school education should come in competition base, whereas others believe that pupils ought to learn using cooperation methods. I firmly agree that student will benefit more of co-education frame of reference. This essy will discuss both views and will show and draw a conclusin.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Guardians,schoolmates and surrounding environment act as catalysts on a student's academic achievements.Although some tend to believe that school-grades are influenced primarily by parents,others hold the position that classbuddies are more influential in this regard.However,i strongly opine that school friends and parents both are equally vital in influencing a child's achievements in school.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is true that children have refreshing effects on their minds if they grew up in an open environment. In my opinion, it is crucial that every child must go to school. In this way, they will have an exposure to their outside world and they will witness a lot of things which they can not see if they are at their home.
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People say reading for pleasure helps people to develop imagination and better language skills than watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I totally agree with the saying that reading book for pleasure help develop better imagination and language skill than watching TV.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

some people believe that current generation has too many options or choices when compared to olden generation. Even I acknolwledge on this point and in this essay i will be discussing the reasons for this.
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International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages?

The world is becoming a global village, therefore international tourists play vital role in world industry. There are many merits and demerits of this view. The major advantage is it connects the people,as it makes good relationship worldwide along with this people learn different tradition and cultures of different nations .Secondly, it also lucrative for economic . As , tourists visit in many countries and they spend lots of money for instance India has rich tradition a...
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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that in today's word, subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both views and give your opinion

no, history is not a important subject its just a time waste subjects like science and technology are im[portant and help ful compered to history. What is history? Should we study history? Who creates history? Is history relevant?
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Some people use the Internet to search for solutions to their medical problems. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples from your experience.

In recent years, technological advancement is changing the way human being accesing information whether it is filed of business,news or even a health care issue. All of this possible because of easy access and availability of Internet. People have contradict view about getting remedies or treatment solution for their medical disseas over internet is leading to positive developement. In my opinion, trustworthy information of a health problem is definitely will help person.
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Some countries spend lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?

Nowadays most countries in the world are investing funds to make bicycle usage convenient.
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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Over the year, there has been an immense development in cities and town this has led young individuals to migrate in search of a better life by leaving their elders at countryside. It has been found that loneliness and gap in family bonding are often caused due to the long distance relationship between old and young people but there are also measures for this issue.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often a point of discussion that whether children should be alloted duties to charitable activities in their schooling. I strongly believe that charitable activities are the need the hour and in this essay I am going to discuss that how these activities develop life skills among children and make them realise the value of life.
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Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans. Others believe it isn’t appropriate to use animals for such experiments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been seen that we developed so may thing in field of science and technology. Regarding to that it took us lots of years of research and proper testing before using for mankind. There are view about wheather should we carry out medical experiments on animals before trying for humans,whilsht other are oppositing this statement. This essay will discuss both view before jumping to any conclusion.
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Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop when they become adults. Why do so many adults stop physical exercise? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nutritional diet along with physical activities are secret of a healthy life. Maintenance of mental health can be achieved by sports. There are various reasons for not playing sports at older ager which we will discuss follow.
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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays numerous international students fraternise at local campuses. While,some students are content studying in their own country,many other choose to study abroad. This essay will discuss why many student follow their dreams on home soil but why many view it beneficial to study overseas for future careers.
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