IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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whether or not someone achieves their aim is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A growing number of people argue that people's achievement and their purpose are mostly related to luck, while others believe that luck does not help people achieve success . This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and I completely disagree with this opinion for several reasons.

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4. (Bình) To improve the quality of education, some people think that we should encourage our students to educate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that will result in loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticise their teachers in order to improve the quality of education.However, another group of people convinced that it may cause loss of respect and discipline.His essay will discuss both perspectives and explain why I believe that constructive feedback from students can be beneficial for the educational process.

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Some people think that government should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Society has divided for two parts, the firts group believes that policymakers should concentrate on the developing railways, others, vice versa, opine that the road construction is more important.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reason for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Solar energy is a new source that have been found since 1839 (Solar Energy Industries Association) and now used for household power in many region. This energy comes from heat radiation and sunlight transformed into electricity or thermal energy. People prefers solar than water or wind because it's more efficient and compatible on many country. Although there are pros and cons of solar energy that made buyers think twice before buying.

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Some school leavers travel or work for period of time instead of going directly to university. Do the advatages outweigh the disadvantages?

Graduating school students apply to university straight away while others go adventures or became employed for a while. I personally recommend you skip one year after leaving high school. To prepare yourself financially and mentally to the territary education.

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Some people think that governments should spend money on raiways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Society has divided into two parts, the first group believes that policymakers should concentrate on developing railways, others, vice versa, opine that road construction is more important.

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as cyber-perpetration is becoming a main online problem, socail media and technological companies should be obligated be government to launch strict policy(ies) against cyber-bullying. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Recently, as people spend more time on social media, cyber-perpetration is starting to be a much more serious problem. As a result, I think it is natural for the government to come up with policies for preventing cyber-bullying. However, the freedom of the citizens to say what they want is crucial as well, so I believe the rules should be kept to a minimum.

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some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. why are these laws introduced? do you think they are a positive or negative development?

Most of the countries have laws that employees can work for only some amount of time. There are debates about whether this is a benefit or a drawback for workers. I think it is a protection for employees to balance their life, so it is beneficial.

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Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

In recent years, the crucial environmental issue has been climate change. This problem is evaluated from different perspectives, but it has been proven that its main cause is human use of fossil fuels. This means that we should stop burning fossil fuels and replace them with renewable energy sources. Nevertheless, others people are sure that oil, gas, and coal are substances that society needs for sustainable economic growth.

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Increasing the prices of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree? what other measures do you think might be effective?

The effective way to reduce traffic and pollution issues is by increasing the prices of petrol, in my opinion, I disagree because there are different ways to reduce the problems by giving alternative solutions such as public transport, wider roads.

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It is common practice for some students to take a gap year between high school and university in order to do charitable work abroad in underdeveloped countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people of doing volunteer work?

Many students, after high school diploma, go abroad in order to do a charitable work in some underdeveloped countries for one year, before starting University.

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The number of TV programmes is growing day by day.Some people say that it is good as it gives people more choices, while others say it affects the quality of TV programmes.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In the digital age, the burst of TV programme production symbolises the flourishness of the broadcasting industry. While some believe that this allows audience to have more options, critics argue that such mass production woud deteriorate the shows' quality. In my opinion, the quality of the shows should keep up with the quantity. I would illustrate the opposing views in the aspect of the entertainment patterns and preferences.

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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often argued that the development of air travel and telecommunications allow the world connected. From my perspective, the benefits of the issue are greater than drawbacks since those technologies stay the world connected and provide job opportunities.

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Some people think that all law breakers should be put into prison while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is always a topic of bebate weather criminals must be sentence to jail or other ways can be used. In my opinion different ways such as rehabilitation centers are more efficient in order to make them good civilians.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by a very small number of people. People say that govt should spend public money on saving these languages. Discuss both views and give ur opinion.

Nowadays, several languages are in danger of extinction, due to the fact that they are spoken by very few people. Someone's tought is that Government shoud economically support these languages. Oppositely, other ones believe that this isn't a fundamental issue.

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Some people think that the use of mobiles (cell) phones should be banned in public places such as in libraries, shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The debate over whether mobile phones should be banned in public areas such as in libraries,shops and on public transport.While I admit that mobile phones can be a source of being updated. I mostly disagree with the given statements for some plausible reason .

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion

Some part of the population believes that advertising has a great success at making us purchase goods. On the other hand, there are those who suggest that we are used to advertisements everywhere, so we do not bring attention to them anymore. I merely agree with both opinions, because both of them are relevant in various situations. Firstly, obviously, advertisements are even in places where they are not meant to be. However, most of them are meaningless. As a result, we usually do not consider a thought looking at them. For instance, in many countries there are lots of advertisement boards along the roads, but drivers do not look at them. They have seen as many of them as they understood that it is useless to bring attention to them. From my knowledge, I do not remember the last time I saw the advetisement about anything and thought it would be nice to buy it. In contrast, there are exceptions. We are so used to common and boring advertisement, so we do not look at them. Neverthele...

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

A lot of kids today are spending too much time using mobile phones, as technology is rising, and the internet can make our lives easier than before. In this essay, I will tackle the positive and negative outcomes of this.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. Discuss advantage and disadvantages to children doing so?

In many countries, parents encourage their children to take up part-time employment during their free time. While this practice can offer several valuable benefits, it may also present certain drawbacks. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of children engaging in part-time work.

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People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teacher are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?

It is often argued that rich people are recognised as successful people, while others insist that those who contribute to society are the most successful. From my perspective, the latter seems more plausible since those who contribute to society make better societies, but both sides of view will be examined in this essay.

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