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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the developed world, the average life expentancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

In this contemporary era, the availability of numerous treatments and trend of opting healthy lifestyle is decreasing the mortality rates. This phenomenon have several negative implications for the upcoming generations and the community such as less job opportunities for young adults and overpopulation in the nations. Additionally, regulatory bodies can impose some restrictions on the age of retirement in the professions, to enhance the ability of young people to demonstrate their skills.

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Scientific innovation is always a positive thing and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

There is no denying the fact that human innovation in general always has many advantages,especially the scientific one.While it is a commonly held belief that it is not important and goverments should invest in other sectors,there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, i consider that scientific innovation has significant positive impact.

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world others believe that some information is too important or do valuable to be shared freely discuss both views and give your opinion

There is an ongoing debate about whether disclosing as much information as possible in various fields such as scientific research, business, and the academic world is beneficial, while others argue that some of the information is too sensitive or valuable to be shared openly. This essay will discuss both views and present my own opinion.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In today`s contemporary era, people are wearing various types of clothes. Some people say it is easy to identify a person and his charater by their clothes, while other argues that it is not possible. In my opinion, i am agree with the statement, that we can identify people and his culture from their selection of clothes.

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The traffic congestion and housing problems can be solved by moving the large industrial and factory and their employees to the rural area what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, it has been argued that the best way to tackle the problem of traffic congestion and housing in urban areas is by moving large industries and manufactures with their workers to the countryside.From my point of view l absolutely disagree with the statement due to the damage which will happen to the environment in the area. In this essay, I will support my opinion by showing the drawbacks.

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Traffic congestion and housing problems in larger cities could be solved by moving large industries and factories and their employees to the rural areas. What extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, it has been argued that the best way to tackle the problem of traffic congestion and housing in urban areas by moving large industries and manufacturies with their workers to the countryside.From my point of view l absolutely disagree with the statement due to the damage which will happen to the environment in the area. In this essay I will support my opinion by showing the drawbacks.

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The limited budgets of governments, especially those in developing countries, are better spent on health and education than on employment-generating projects. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, funds is crucial for all governments to maintain the countries’ business and people living. When the governments, especially the ones in developing countries are running out of funds, they need to be more conservative on their cost allocation. Some people believed that the government should reserve more money on health and education instead of projects initiated by job employment. From my perspective, I agree with this as they are more critical to the country’s development. My reasons will be further explained in this essay with supporting examples.

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In some parts of the world, students are required to pass an entrance exam in order to be able to enter university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of passing an entrance exam?

University enterance exams are common in many countries and are essential to complet the third level education. This essay suggests that these tests can show the hard working future sutdents and those who should be accepted in difficult majors. However, unfair opportinity and high cost are negative aspects of it.

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Some businesses observe that new employees who just graduated from a college or university seem to lack the interpersonal skills needed for communication with their colleagues. What could be the reason for this? What solutions can help address this problem?

theres currently ongoing issue in some businesses regarding new employee's when it comes to communications with their co-workers as they lack of skill. In my point of view experience play an important role and iwill be adressing the issue and solution in my essay.

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Cyber insecurity is a rising problem in many countries. What problems does a lack of cyber security cause to Internet users? What solutions can you suggest to solve it?

The internet weak security is one of the most increasing issues globally. This essay will discuss the problems of the easily acsess to personal data online and the danger of stealing snsitve information from big companies. It will argue that the best solutions are riasing awarness among users and and using more secure programms for thses orgnaizations.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is' evident that there are many manufactured food and drinks that include high levels of sugar

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Some people think that the best wat to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative wats or reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the present age, there is a debate regarding crimes and how to deal with it. Some people believe that the proper way to decrease the crime rate is by giving longer sentences. Others, say there are many better methods to reduce crime rates. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue of favor and latter.

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1.Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views

In recent times, the topic of whether upon graduating from senior high school, youngsters ought to keep on studying further or not. While individuals ague that going on studying university or college will be a best way in order to ensure a successful career, others believe that getting a job right after graduation is a wiser choice. This essay will provide a thorough examination of these contrasting

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Some people think that strict punishment for driving offences are the key to reduce accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both views.

In today's era, the public have seperate their opinions regarding to traffic safety. Many have said that punishment should be given strictly to shrink road accidents, meanwhile, others believe that other measures would be more favourable in order to achieve a safer driving pace. Both perspectives has reasonable arguements, which shall be discussed further in this essay.

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Communication technologies, such as smart phones, tablets and other mobile devices, have experienced rapid developments. Some people think the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to the advancement of technology the way of taking become very convenient with the help of electronic gadgets such as mobile phones and laptops . However, a few individuals think that it has more demerits as compared to merits. In my opinion , I thinks pros are more because people can share their thoughts and ideas online .

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Some people think that university education should focus on skills for future employment. Others think academic study should be the only focus. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today`s modern era, people believe that practicle skill from University is more important for the job, while other argues that academic degree is the only priority. In my opinion, skill is permenent and practicle, so insitute must focus on skill level but also acedamic study is important too.

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The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed due to technological advances. Do the advantagesof this trend outweigh the disadvantage?

The varity and excellence of food availability has transformed due to the innovation in technology which has many positive and negative effects on the market as well as on consumers. However, I believe there are more benefits due to technology advancement instead of the drawback.

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Some people think that it is more important to spend time developing a successful career. Others believe that it is more important to spend time with family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today`s modern era, people are thinking that they need to study higher so they can be successful in their life, while other argues that there is more important to spend time with family. In my opinion, successful career is more important because with that people can earn enough money, in result, they can provide good facilities to family.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today`s contemporary era, people are forced to work in which they are not intrested or they do not have talent for that job role. This is happen due to family pressure or poverty, another reason could be responsibilities on individual, this can lead to failure or boredom.

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Traffic congestion and housing problems in larger cities could be solved by moving large industries and factories and their employees to the rural areas. What extent do you agree or disagree ?

Over population has been the major problem causing traffic jam and accomodation issue in developed contries. To eradicate this problem , it is encourage to relocate big companies and organisation with their staffs to less populated areas. This essay will discuss the positive and negative effect of this opinion and strongly supported the idea.

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