IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that teachers should not give homework to the school students. Others, however, contradict and consider that it is necessary for their education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A part of the demographic of indiviouals hold the belief that teachers are not suppose to give homework to students, and some are at the opposite of that and see it as nescessary for them to do homework after school hours, im at the understanding that the middle ground of this would be the silverlining for both views.

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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extend do you agree?

The universities around the world are getting more expensive, therefore, there are many student can not go to study in the university. The question is, some people believe the university should be free for the student. In my opinion, I believe the university has to be free, therefore, there many people who have good score, however, they can not afford the cost. In this essay, I am going to introduce my opinion and provides many examples that support my opinion.

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People living in the twenty-first century are happier than people of previous times. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that people in the twenty first century are elated, than previous centuries. I agree with this statement people in modern times have better health care and activites to do daily which can improve the quality of life. Also technology increases the easiness of lives.

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Many criminals re-offended after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Many criminals re-offended after they have been punished and spent time in jails. This leads to pertinent question: why do some people return back to crimes after having been released from jails, and how could we help them to protect them from criminals attempts? In this essay, I will discuss this problem and illustrate some of the causes and solutions.

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Some people view giving presents as an important way to show care to family and friends, others think there are more important things that can be done to show care and appreciation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In contempory society people have different views on giffting and how it is translated in a genral way that it shows that people care, but others think that there is many ways for people to show genuine care other than gifting. Personally i think giving people presents is a nice gesture that can be thought of as considerate.

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Some believe that research on family history is a useful thing to do, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. give me idea what to write about

It is argued that research on family history is a useful thing to do, while others think it is not. This essay will discuss both perspectives before explaining why I believe that people should spend time for their future.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For a parcel of the population, life in big cities is considered to be bad for people's health. I agree partially with that idea. While living in big centers can bring daily challenges to life, some benefits are also observed by many residents.

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Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no denying the fact that many people working remotely are often using developed technologies nowadays. While it is a commonly held belief that depending on advanced technologies and working from home simultaneously, don't benefit employers, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that working from home is benefical for both workers and employers.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all overr the world. Do you think this is a positive or nrgative development?

It is undeniable that these days a lot of consumers can go to the supermarket and purchase processed fast food and sugary drinks all over the world. While many people believe that these kinds of food and beverages are not good for human health, others argue against this idea. This essay will analyse this topic from both viewpoints and express my opinion.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There’s some group of people who believe that investment in the art is worthy of government duty. However, another group that believes that the government should focus and spend money on public services instead of arts. I mostly agree that the government should spend on public services that could benefit society rather than arts that only specify only small groups of people.

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Some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for Human's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

While some people believe that scientists expermenting with animal is the only way to guarantee that new products wil be safe for human's uses. I partially agree that animal testing historically guaranteed product saftey, but I strongly disagree that it is the only way. This essay will discuss this topic and then I will express my own perspective.

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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest

Nowadays, the gym and sport places offer various facilities that obviously support how human build their muscle or make their body healthy. However, instead of using these places, some people tend to overconsuming rich-oil food and less moving, allowing the lackness of their healthy body.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sports or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, personal training has become increasingly popular compared to playing sports with others. There is a growing debate about whether hiring personal trainer makes people depressed and even independent. Some people believe that exercising with personal trainer may give professional and private services, While Others argue that this type of training can make people isolated and depressed. In my opinion, personal training has a lot of advantages rather than group exercise. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.  One main reason is that personal fitness allows people to receive more personalized training. This is because personal training is usually done alone with trainer. Although people can make relationship with trainer, people may lose the opportunity to become socialization with others. For example, people who hire a personal fitness trainer exercise independently with only trainer without other members. As a result, people may feel depressed.  Howev...

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In today’s time the internet is making it easy to study online from home. Some prefer online courses to study and they think it is better. Others prefer classroom education. Discuss both views and share your opinions.

The emerge of the internet allows students to surf information easily at home, especially in studying by online courses. However, other students argue that offline classroom is better. These two positions offer different advantages and disadvantages for students to learn something new.

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It is argued that the non academic subjects such as physical education, cookery and home science should not be taught at school and the sole focus should be on academic subjects considering the growing burden on children's mind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, it is commonly argued that educational institutions must mainly focus on academic subjects rather than teaching physical education, cookery and home science. I completely disagree with this statement.

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the internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

the modern era, the network has changed the life and the way of thinking in humans and the world is connected, as a result, it is becoming a global village. community think that in the near future, everyone will think and behave similarly. I agree with this statement as individuals are trying to adapt to the cultures of others by watching videos on social media.

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Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have much higher salaries than other workers in a company. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

In modern society, life has changed a great deal, especially in how seniors have salaries. This includes the high salaries and the company . Some people believe that hard work is common. However, other people believe that it is not important. Thus, both views have significant points. This assay provides key information to explore the topic.

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Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aimed at tourists, other people believe that it is the only way to save such traditions in the world today. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. |

An increasing number of people started to discuss that whether cultural traditions will be destroyed when they are used as money-making machines aimed at tourists. From my perspective, I strongly believe that tourism industries save such traditions in the world today.

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Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives, while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals think technology changed their lives for better however, there is still a big group of population believing that computers has too much impact on the way people live. I personally think that, even though machinery can have some positive impact, it is also important to make sure that it does not take away human lives.

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Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others believe it is better to start in secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Everyting in this world has merits and demerits, a significant example is start learning a foreign language at primary school. There are alot people belive that it is advantage where other belive that it is disadvantage. In my opinion I belive that it is mixture between both.

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