IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

It is widely argued that most people think experimentation on animals is necessary, but other people feel that experimentation on animals is unjustified and illegal. I believe that people need continued experimentation on animals, and there are alternatives to replace experimentation on animals.

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Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligance enhance the learing experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

nowadays, many people are increasingly using A.I technology and computers for online learning, thus leading to enhance the experience of online education. This writer believes that this is a positive development due to creativity improved for student and convenience.

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Computers and A.I. tehnology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative dvelopment?

In this today digital's era, more and more robots and man-made tools are being applied to studying on network. There will be enhancement of various styles in studying, although, this is a negative development because of distraction and health problems.

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People spend large amounts of time and money on clothes, hair styles and make up to change their appearance. It is unimportant for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences of focusing on physical appearance?

Individuals should spend time on their appearances by changing styles, hair styles. It is necessary for people to take care of their appearance to improve the favor from others. In light of this, I contend that focusing on appearance will bring an negative effect on their health and physical.

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A number of people are moving from rural area to city’s. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, Urbanization has become spread all around the world. As far as I’m concerned, this phenomenon has several drawbacks which I will discuss in the following paragraphs.

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The spread of a ‘global language’ such as English will threaten national languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, the English language has developed in more countries because it gives opportunities and helps people's lives. However, some people think, it may affect other languages in English and I am going to give my opinion in this essay.

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Some parents think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better careers for their kids.

There are two opinions, some people think that centers provide for children is better than family members. Other believe on the contrary. To be honest, my opinion, that professional workers for baby are the most competent then members’ extended family. Such employees trained to work with kids.

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While some people like to live at home, other people think that living in an apartment has more advantages. Discuss both views.

Everyone has a choice of accommodation to live in, depending on different reasons. Although some individuals choose to stay in a house, other people believe that staying in an apartment has many benefits. In my own view, I think living in a apartment has a lot of merits.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment it necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach behaviour children?

Over the last few years, teachers and parents have avoided wrong punishment whereas, if parents or teachers have been punishing the bad sort of punishment, children have scared adults. Therefore, right punishment is necessary to help them learn the difference between right and wrong.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time after work with co-workers while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some folks enjoy to spend their free time with co-workers, other group of people chose to keep their pravite activites and work life separeted.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some argue that the goverments should be focusing on looking for life and habitations on other planest, while other countered that that is a waste of tax payer money when it could be funded to solve problem we already have on Earth.

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree

Some people think that high salary is more important than job satisfaction. In my opinion, occupational gratification more meaning thing, on the other words, salary is not whole thing.

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The best way to solve the world's enviromental prolem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many believe that the most appropriate way to cater the issue of enviromental problem of world is by adjusting the price of fuel.I completely disagree with this statement as it will not only influence the car but also person's pocket and i will discuss my view in recent paragraphs.

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Many people believe that social networking sites ike Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree. sive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words

DIGITAL MEDIA IS PLAYED A HIGH PREMIUM ON THE MODERN WORLD.AS IT IS ENUNCIATED A SECTION OF SOCIETY HARBOUR THE BELIEF THAT SOCIAL MEDIA IS AN APOCALYPTIC DEMON. ON DRAWING A DIALECTIC PERPECTIVE AND QULITATIVE META-SYNTHETIC METHODOLOGY, I WOULD PEN HOW SOCIAL IMPACTS OM INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY.ALBEIT THERE IS DICHOTOMY OF VIEWS ON THIS CONCERN , I HARBOUR THE BELIEF THAT THIS APPPRENSION IS TOTALLY UNWARRENTED .I PROVIDE AN INTERESTING JUSTIFICATIONS AND EMEPLIFY ESSENCIAL ELEMANTS TO JUSTIFY MY PERSPECTIVE.

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Some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions. Discuss both sides and then give your own opinion.

Continuous learning is vital to all individuals. It is not just applicable to those who are preapring to be employed in the future.

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Children in rural areas are being left behind in their academic development. why is this the case . What solution can you suggest

Education is the fundamental right of every childrens. Academic development of rural students are far behind the urban areas . In this essay , I would like to discuss the causes and measures for advancement .

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In some places, money earned from tourism has become an important part of the economy. What are the advantages and disadvantages of replying on tourism as a major source of revenue.

Tourism become a splendid source for a country to boost up its economic growth.However, there are normally lot of tourists gathering on historical and other places that contribute their money to that nation where they are spending it while this concern have its drawbacks also. In this eassy , i will going to put a shadow on both merits and demerits regard to this statement along with logical conclusion.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Day by day, tuition by online platforms, becoming more common, we have people we believe that computer-based education have more advantages or other teenagers consider the conditional study, indispensable.

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Many governments are now trying to prevent global warming and the effect it has on our environment. They are trying to reduce the things which contribute to global warming such as pollution from cars and destruction of the rain forests. Describe what you think the problem is and the actions you think your government should take to solve it.

There are intensive phenomenons causing by global warming, which ecilits increasing concerns in addressing method aimd to issues as well as in the role and onus of regulative bodies. This essay will delve into the problem and the relative measure can be employeed by government.

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Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product. What factors, do you think, influence the success of a company?

Successfull business how does it look like? Is it about the product you do or is it about the service you provide?

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