IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.”

Some people think that children should not make their own choices because they may become selfish. However, other people think that children should make decisions about things that affect them. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think citites are the best place tolive.Other prefer to live in the countryside.Discuss both of view and give your opinion

A group of people believe that living in the urban areas are better whilst others think that rural is better. This essay will discuss both of these 2 point of views and my opinion will be stated at the end of the conclusion.

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All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement. Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern world, all university should have an undergraduate program which include a where students should spent a period of time spent studying outside the country or doing a work placement. although this trend has several drawback, but advantage outweigh them in long run.

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Some people say that in the digital age, theatres and cinemas are no longer important as people can watch all the entertainment they want online. Others argue that theatres and cinemas are still important both economically and culturally. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern era, many people prefers to watch movie in cinemas and theatres. While, some other people argue that theatres and cinemas plays and important role to our country both economically and culturally. This essay eludicates both the relevant views with examples, with my point of view.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Science degrees in university such as medical or biology are not popular these past few years in most of the countries. There are some reasons behind this argument as well as consequences to the society. This essay will discuss further about this trending topic.

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ome people think that mothers should spend most of their time raising their family, and therefore the government should support them financially. Do you agree or disagree?

Mothers play an essential role in the upbringing of their children. It is often argued that the government should support the mothers financially as being a mom is a full time job. I personally beleive that when mothers get paid by the state this makes them financial independent so they don't regret while taking career breaks.

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Some people believe that technological advancements have made traditional skills and methods obsolete, while others argue that these skills are still valuable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One group of people suppose that new technologies replaced the old traditional skills and hand technics however other group of people think that we should keep humanity and human's simple skills.

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to downloat copyrighted music and books from the Internrt for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

One of the impact that technology improvement bring is download musics and books that are not free of charge in the internet. This argument carries positive and negative impacts along with it. According to this topic, this essay would discuss more about the advatantage and disadvantage.

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In the future,people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash.All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you thibk this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

In the future , may people will pay only by card or technology payments. I think this will happen next few years because there are a lot of fake money.

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Caring for children is an important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take childcare training courses. Do you agree or disagree?

Children are the foundation of a society. These days it is being discussed that, the parents should be made mandatory to take childcare training course. I fully agree with this opinion ,and will discuss valid reasons in this essay.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The technological advancements in present century has improved connectivity between different places. Some individuals believe that government should spend more on new railway systems, but others believe that existing community transport systems should be approved. I believe that balance approach should be made , and in this upcoming essay I will elaborate on my ideas.

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In some countries, the number of people visiting art galleries is reducing. What do you think the reasons for this are? How can we solve this problem?

In recent years, many art galleries in some countries are facing a decline in the number of visitors. In this essay I will discuss the reasons for this problem and I will present the solution for it.

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The best way to provide enough homes in large cities is to build tall apartment blocks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, It is true that an important part of the population is debating with the idea of building tall apartments blocks to provide enough homes in large cities in the world. I totally agree with the idea of building infrastructures blocks to offer homes for every citizens.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or share a home with friends. Do you agree or disagree with this approach? Give your opinion

Leaving a guardian's house after finishing high school for young people is a common concept in various nations across the world, where they mostly reside individually or share accommodation with colleagues. From my perspective, I largely agree with this trend.

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ome people believe that women should play an equal role to men in a country's police or military forces, while others think that women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that women should play an equal role to men in a country's police or military forces, while others think that women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopement next year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrates the layout of Southwest Airport at present and next year after the redevelopment.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negavtive devolopment?

An increasing number of people to talk to their friends online instead of in person. In my opinion, this is a negavtive development which can to lonliness, psychological problems and also lack of social skills.

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some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some individuals think that tertiary education should be free for all, but I do not agree with this statement. I think official authorities should help poor students by granting scholarships instead of removing fees entirely.

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Being a celebrity- such as famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Being a celebrity has an advantages and disadvantages. The famous people can gain alot of money but they can't live their life privacy. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo he recive a millions of dollars per week but he can't hide his life because the fans in Saudi Arabia they wan't to see his life even if its in his house. In my opinion, its bring a lot of problem.

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Study shows that many criminals have a low level education.For that reason, some people believe that the bast way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

A lot of Criminal people they have no education because they weren't study when they young. In my opinion, I think take care of them is important than education because maybe they are hurt before.

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