IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the development of science had influented human society. While many people believe that improving people's lives is the primary aim of science, I would say protecting the environment and exploring the universe are also the important aim of science.

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Some people are of the opinion that we must discontinue using fossil fuels and adopt renewable sources of energy. Yet others feel that renewable sources of energy are not as dependable as fossil fuels. Discuss both views.

With the emerging demand for renewable resources has prompted the debate about whether renewable resources are reliable and we can completely eradicate fossil fuels. While it cannot be denied that whether we can fully transform to renewable resources like electric, solar and wind but still, it does offers much more benefits such as reducing environmental concerns and global warming.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, most of people plans for their future ahead of time. Young adults take early decision for their career path which helps them to have more satisfied life than others, Although, it is benefited to choice their job path in early stage this does not mean that it is an acceptable decision.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate among the population, some of them think that kids should start their regular education life at very advanced ages while others emphasize children should begin after their seven years old. Beginning to school at an early age has some advantages like fast adaptation to challenges at education. In contrast, the children start more willingness and capacity to solve problems they encounter after 7 years of age.

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Some people think students should learn practical skills like cooking or fixing things. Others think school should only teach academic subjects.

Some people believe students should learn practical skills like cooking or fixing things. Others think school should only teach academic subjects. I think students should learn practical skills because they are important and helpful for the future.

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Media coverage of violent crime frightens people and encourages criminals. Some people say it should be banned from newspapers and TV programmes. To what extend do you agree or disagree

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is whether newspapers and TV programmes should be banned for encouraging crime. First things first it doesn’t matter we absolutely need newspapers and TV channels to know what is happening in the country and sometimes in the world. But if there’s something about crime and you name it , it shouldn’t be banned.

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Parents are putting a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Many families care a lot about their children. Some parents put pressure on their children to be successful in their life. Therefore, it is essential to know the reasons and discuss positive and negative effect.

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Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other, while others say that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The modern communities help individuals to learn many things. Some people believe that modern society allows people to be more dependent on each other ,whereas others claim that people is more independent from each other. Therefore, it is crucial to understand reasons and discuss both opinions.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nawadays, teenagers crime are increasing significantly in most towns worldwide. Multiple factors are pushing youth toward this behaviour. In this essay, both reasons and solutions are mentioned and discussed.

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some people get into debts by buying things they do not need and are unable to afford. what are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Some people owe the society a lot of money because they are spending on things that they can't afford unnecessarily. The reasons of such attitude is because of the influence of the media and as they are allowed to do so, and the viable solutions is by placing regulations to media and their family must place restrictions on them.

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People living in large cites today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

At present, folks residing in metro center struggling with a lot of issues in their routine life. According to my perspective, such a group of individuals couping up with the issue of excessive traffic jams, a polluted atmosphere and escalating crime ratio. In this essay, i will initially elaborate on the complication and will discuss how can civic administration push their residents to migrate countryside.

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High-level computer skills are a necessary and important factor leading to a successful career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid advancement of technology, advanced computer skills become an essential and vital factor for finding a satisfactory career. From my perspective, although high-level computer skills do make people become more employablein order to pursue a successful career, other jobs such as author and history professor do not need such advanced skills.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or orgainsation. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantages of self-employed?

Present days More person are selects their own business rather than to joined privte companies. Self job will allow more relaxation and stressness although their a few drawbacks inbuilt in own business. This essay will discuss reason and problems as per given statement.

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In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medical care is a concern in many countries people owning to they have to pay for this service, nevertheless, there is a group of individuals that perceive that it should be a free service provided by the government. From my perspective, I truly agree that the population need a free option, and my main reasons will be explained in the next essay.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Billions are committed to growth driven world. Nowadays, crime rate is became sky rocketed in the metropolitant by the young generation. Myraid of justifications are responsible behind the scenario, and it is crucial to take some inevitable steps to mitigate the issue.

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Some people today feel that physical money will no longer be used in the future. Others feel it will still have some uses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nobody can ignore the reality that we are in a digital society today. We buy most of stuff online paid by mobile banks. Some people really believe the physical money will disappear in the future, while others have the opposite opinion. From my view, I totally agree that the physical money will no longer be used in the future unless the electricity disappear. I believe nobody can disagree that 100% businesses can exchange their deals with digital money, no matter business -to-business, or business-to-consumers, even between two individuals.

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Some people believe that free housing should be provided by governments for under-priviliged and people who can't afford to buy a house. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give example based on your own experience.

It is irrefutable that housing is a basic necessity of every human being living on the planet. It is asserted by some folks that governement must provide free housing for deprived people as well to poor individuals. I am harmony with this notion, as we shall discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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People can know about cultures and life through internet. So there is no need to travel to other countries to know about the culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Internet plays the vital role in gathering information and learning in today's world which can also be applied towards learning different cultures. I do not agree with the fact that this is the best way to gain knowledge towards any culture rather visiting to the respective country will always be the optimum solution which i will explain below in this essay.

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Government spend a lot of money on public celebration such as national holiday and public festival. Some people say that government must spend money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree

Governement are funding most of the public events to commemorate and celebrate the country itself. I strongly agree that the government should spent money on festivals and holidays because it represent how the government support the community of their country. Although, using some of the governments funds for recreational and other things should also be taken into consideration.

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Some people government spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuse both view and give your opinion.

In my point of view i see that there is alot of ways to fix this proplem . To fix a proplem you need to see how the proplem will start or whats causing that trouble, like in our situation here its traffic congestion . Our issue today has alot of causes like accidents,roadwork,bad waether,and many more causes that can really harm people ,and maked them frastrated.

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