IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 5

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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New technology changed the way children spend their free time do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.instance, a child who spends most of their time on mobile games or social media may feel shy or uncomfortable while talking to classmates or teachers at school.

Nowadays, the modern technology has changed the way children spend their leisure time. this essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks. However, I believe that the benefits generally outweigh the disadvantages.

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There are many extinct animal species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, extinction animal species has become one of the environmentalist concerns and they are worried about its consequences for ecosystem. Some people argue this issue must be prioritized for the government, while other people believe there are a lot of problems for human beings which are more important than animal preserving. In this essay, we will discuss both points of view in depth. In my opinion, both perspectives are valid and they should be taken into consideration but human problems are more important than animal species extinction. To begin with, it is obvious that preserving animal species from extinction has a lot of positive benefits for environment and even people's lives. When one specie dies out it affects on other species lives; for example, in some habitats when one of bird species become extincted it leads to an increase in the population of other species which was that bird's prey. Therefore, increasing in number of certain specie cause a lot of problems for t...

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, poverty exists in every country, although the reasons and solutions may differ from place to place. There are several cause of poverty, and both government and individuals can take steps to reduce it. This essay will discuss both views after see my perspective.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some scientists think that in universe there are highly developed life on another planets. That's why they should try to sent a message and contact them. Meanwhile others think that is a not good idea and can be dangerous for us. I mostly agree, with the first opinion since it would be evidence that Earth not only plane with intelligent life and progress in science.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's life, there are many concerns about envoiromental problems and some people think ellimination of some animal and plant species is the most important one, while others think that there are other essential problems we have to care about. In my point of view, although there are many other kinds of environmental issues, animal and plant protection must be a priority for the human race.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we are living in a digital world , and it has replaced the traditional ways of doing business in a number of fields , like advertising. Now, the society is split into two halves discussing whether these digital marketing strategies are capable enough to make them a product or not. In this era of social media, what truly persuades a user is getting repeated suggestions to buy a product they browsed. It influences the human mind and encourages them to give it a try. Recently, I searched for a honeymoon package in Mexico on Safari , and now, my Instagram is full of advertisements suggesting cheap and luxurious Mexico stays. Honestly, I am just on the edge of booking one of the deals. This shows the power of commercial. Though it's true that these advertisements follow you like a shadow but due to increased awareness and how a lot of people have reported scams after clicking on these advertisements, it is common to pay no heed to them. Nowadays, scammers replicate renowned pro...

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some university students aim to study extra courses in addition to their main subjects,meanwhile, others hardly believe that it is vital to focus in core courses.

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Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualification for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, individual's social skills have become important as well as qualifications. Most companies are looking to human capabilities in dealing and interacting with others. From my experience I found that social competence is required and can have a significant impact on hiring and promotion decisions. in this essay I will discuss this point and provid examples that strength the idea.

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Climate change is a concerning global issue. Who has the main responsibility to take action to solve this problem, governments, large companies, or individuals?

In recent years, the issue of climate change has gained considerable attention in both academic and public debates. While opinions on this matter differ widely, I firmly believe that, governments, large companies and individuals have the main responsibility to take action to solve climate change problem. This essay will examine several key aspects to present a balanced and well-reasoned viewpoint.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the number of the young adults are increasing a lot and the number has gradually exceed the number of the older people. Someone think it is a good condition for the society. In my mind, I agree that the larger nuber of the youth will bring the better occassion to the society.

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate as to the school curriculum. Many people tend to think that all competitive sports should not be included in the school curriculum. I totally dispute with this opinion, from my standpoint, to engage in competitive sports plays a central role in shaping pupils' development. I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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Some students take a gap year after graduating from school to work and travel before they continue their studies. However, some people think that working prepares them more for future life than travelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been thought that learners take a gap year after finishing from high school to work or to see the world before continuing their studies. But, some individual think having a job during a gap year prepares them more for realistic life then travelling. I believe that, by far the most helpful for them would be travelling in this circumstance, as they can broaden their horizon and also build network compared to any benefits working can bring.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that government should not allow salaries above certain level. Discuss the view and give your opinion.

In recent years, many people believe that some residents can earn high salaries. However, individuals believe that governments should control salaries at certain levels. I would like to shed light on these situations.

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Do you agree or disagree that improvements in technology reduce the role of the Olympic Games?

It is often argued that improvements in technology have reduced the importance of the Olympic Games. I partially agree with this view because although technology has decreased people’s physical participation in sports, it has also helped to promote and improve athletic performance.

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Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable, and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People all around the world are debating about protecting local culture. One side thinks that banning tourism is a must in some areas, whereas others think that we can't stop change and that it's inevitable and that there are better answers to this problem. In my opinion, I think that tourism shouldn't be banned at all as it is not only important for the economy of most countries and one of their only sources of income, but also it gives countries more recognition as well as an increase in popularity.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people are dependent on technological items. Many people tend to think that reading books is more beneficial than watching TV or playing computer games. I totally agree with this idea, and I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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IN MANY COUNTRIES, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays

In some nations, primary and secondary schools remain close for eight or more weeks. Long holidays are beneficial if weather is too hot and unbearable for students. In contrast vacations for short period of time give students long period for study.

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Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the goverment, while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been increasing debate over whether public health should be primarily the responsibility of the government or individuals themselves. While some argue that government holds the central role in maintaining public health, some believe that individuals carry greater weight for their own wellbeings. From my perspective, even though this concern largely depends on individuals, government plays a leading role in this issue.

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New technology is changing the way children spend their free time. Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

In recent years, it can be seen that the leisure time which is spent by children is changed due to new technology. While it might have some beneficial sides, I strongly argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, as it can cause many mental health problems in kids.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports faculties . Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people consume unhealthy food and they lose your health. Also they known't this things and nowadas, improving public is an important issue. Some people believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best solution, while others argue that additional measures are also necessary.This essay will discuss both views and give reasons why a combined approach may be the most effective.

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