IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 5

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Thesis statement: Disadvantages outweigh advantages

It is often argued that large businesses hold personal information. This essay thinks that the drawbacks of owning this kind of data can outweigh the benefits because although some people might get easier to access some platforms and advertisements, this enables them to get identity theft and financial loss.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, teachers believe that kids should be able to learn music from an ealry age. In this essay, I will discuss the causes behind this trend and introduce my view.

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“Nowadays many businesses use advertising to promote their products. In order to increase sales, businesses often emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?”

It is often argued that many businesses, currently, use advertising as a medium for them

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In some countries, birth rates are fallling and experts say that by 2050 these countries will have far more adults aged 65 and over than children under 15. What problems might this cause in the future? Can anything be done to solve this issue?

It is true that some countries a experiencing reduced birth rate, with some experts assuming that by 2025 these nations will have more older adults than children under the age of 15. This recent development comes with several issues but some viable solutions can be adopted to tackle them.

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Some people say that overeating is harmful and advertising for some food products should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people are of the opinion that excessive eating is detrimental to human health and advertising for some food products should be prohibited. But could this really be the best solution? From my perspective, I completely support this view and this essay will examine my reasons.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best way to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some people that extended prison sentences are the accurate way to reduce crime while others argue that there are other ways to mitigate this problem. Although, there are are some initiative methods like psychological counselling is applicable, I completely agree with long tenure of punishment benefit in abating criminal activities.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly, with the rapid development of technology, Science and Technology subject may be more important in modern society. Whereas some people look upon history subject as something meaningful, other refer to science as significant field in our society. As for my perspective, I am in favor of latter and the reasons will be elaborated on as follows.

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Some people believe that tecehnological advancements lead to a loss of privacy.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the advancement of technology upgraded the quality of life. While it is a commonly held belief that technological evolution may threaten the privacy of some people.There is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, i consider that technology may lose privacy if we do not use it consciously.

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Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages.

Some students after finishing school they travel or work for some time instead of going directly to university. Although it will affect their memory about what they have learned in schools, they will have enough time to save money to study aborad or they will improve their communication skills while travelling.

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Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives more convenient, while others argue that these developments have led to disconnection and isolation in society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people hold an idea that in recent years, technology has enhanced the quality of people’s lives in every fields such as communication. Others argue that poor relationship between people in a society is a consequence of development in technology. I believe that although it might have a negative influence on the bond between people, its benefits over weights its drawbacks.

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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that all the designs of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be under controlled by the government while others argue thatshould be a decision of the finance party of their own . This essay will discuss both views and my opinion as well.

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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

In recent years, sustainable living is required to reduce detrimental effects to our environment due to globalisation and a rapid economic growth. This essay will discuss the challenges for sustainable living and the viable solution to mitigate the impact of this issue.

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Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technological advancements in the world are turning people’s attention to research on. One of the areas which is receiving a lot of attention and curiosity is the study of the universe. Nowadays a lot of money has been spent on space research and while some support the idea of exploring space and consequently using billions of dollars in the study, others believe that the money can be used to improve people’s living conditions on earth. In this essay, I will explain the reasons why I disagree with the investments in spatial studies.

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It is often said that it is not necessary to have a tertiary education to become a successful businessman. To what extent to you agree or disaree with this statement?

In today's era, some people believe that tertiary education is not mandatory for a person to have a successful business. As education is essential part of individual life , I partially agree that it doesn't play vital role in shaping any type of career.

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary world, some believe that it is state's responsibility to provide funds for higher education. Although free schooling imparts opportunities to every person equally and reduces the poverty rate, it can also drop the degree's value and burden on the government. I partially agree with the mentioned statement , and this essay will discuss both points.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is an ongoing debate whether wild animal should be perserved in zoo or not. It is argued by some individuals that keeping animals in the captivity is unethical. Others, however, believe that it can be beneficial for both animals as well as human. Nevertheless, in my opinion, due to the advantages of learning about different species by students, and protecting the endangered species, supporting the animals conservation will be the most appropriate choice.

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More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face-to-face. What are the advantages and disadvantages to this.

It is becoming more preferable by individuals and businesses to communicate either professionally or socially via technology instead of traditional face-to-face conversations. This essay will first suggest that reduced time spendings is the primary benefit of this tendency, while social degradation that can be caused by that excessive use of online communication is the main drawback.

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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger and the blue whale. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued by many that funding institutions that are working on preserving the life of endangered species is financialy inresponsable. I agree with this opinion because this funds could be used for solving more preasing issues, such as children health in low-income nations. Also, I belive that there is a natural selection procces in which some animals will not survive in a changing enveronment.

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Having money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion. (Essay by Keni)

In today's modern world, the debate among having money but less free time is greater than earning less money and having more free time is increasing significant. Ther are some people argue that the former has more benefits, while others believe that having more free time is more important. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I believe that having more free time but having less salary is more crucial.

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human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary era, plants and animals are increasingly threatened by human activities. Consequently, there is a debate regarding whether this trend is irreversible or some measures can reverse it. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and present my opinion.

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