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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this developement has more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Generally, around the world many folks are recently using their cellphones when buying goods and gadgets and this is morely increasing due in this modern world.I totally agree that advantages of this paying method outnumbered the disadvantages, whereas the reasons for this will be discussed in the forthcoming essay.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world some people think that this can not be taken change while others believe action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, human-caused pollution has a detrimental impact on plants and animals in the worldwide. Some people tend to believe that this situation cannot be inhibited; however, others argue that if some steps can be taken, it can be reduced. I would agree with the latter opinion, and I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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Employes sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests,and whether they are married or single.Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful,others disagree. Discuss both the views and your opinion also.

While applying for a job, employer sometimes requests for personal information such as hobbies, interests, and marital status. For the application, a few people believe these questions are relevant while others have a different opinion.

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Successful people try new things and takes new risks rather than only doing what they know how do well. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Risk takers who try new things have a higher chance of success compared to those who invest in things they already know. I partially agree with this opinion because there is no rulebook for success. Thus, investing in emerging things does not guarantee financial benefits.

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In many countries government are investing on new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening. Do you think this is an approciate use of government money?

Nowadays, many countries are heavily investing in new age technologies like Artificial Intelligence, Machine Learning, and Natural Language Processing. The government is investing in these costly ventures because of the number of merits associated.

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we cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with oue own communities and countries. agree or disagree?

There is a widespread belief that population should be responsible for their own groups and nation to give some help rather than outside their communities. I strongly agree with this view because limitations of humans and also regulatory barrier belongs to every state.

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in many countries people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Due to awareness about the healthy lifestyle, the life expectancy has improved in various countries. Though it has sparked a debate in the society about the ageing population. The discussion is whether the elderly are an asset to the country or a liability? I strongly believe, they are the most valuable and underrated people of the society.

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Around the world, more adults can work from home and more children can study from home as computer technology technologies become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In today's world, the existence of internet has completely changed the way of living. Earlier, children used to spend hours reading books to learn, study, and research, but now, everything is just a click away. Similarly, for adults, as the technology becomes cheaper and accessible, working from home is considered the new normal and everyone feels burdened by the thought of going to office. In my opinion, it negatively affects a person's development.

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Some people think that online education is more effective than traditional classroom education. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different opinions about online education. Some people believe that online education is more effective than traditional classroom education, while others think that studying in a classroom is better. This topic is discussed a lot today because technology is part of daily life.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

In the modern era, some employers expect to contact their staff at any time, including during holidays. Even though this practice can bring some benefits to ordinary people, it also raises serious concern for employers' well being. So drawbacks of this trend outweigh the advantages.

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Some consumers are increasingly choosing to buy goods that are produced in their local area, rather than imported goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

Whether people prefer to buy local or imported products is a topic of considerable debate. I strongly believe that buying local goods is far more beneficial, as they can bring some long-term economic advantages.

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Causes of raising unemployment in some regions or villages and their pottential effect of them in society

Unemployment remains a serious issue in both cities and towns. While some urban centres continue to develop, rural and less developed areas are still struggle to create job opportunities. This essay will discuss reasons of raising unemployment in such regions and their potential effects on society.

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New technology changed the way children spend their free time do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.instance, a child who spends most of their time on mobile games or social media may feel shy or uncomfortable while talking to classmates or teachers at school.

Nowadays, the modern technology has changed the way children spend their leisure time. this essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks. However, I believe that the benefits generally outweigh the disadvantages.

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There are many extinct animal species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, extinction animal species has become one of the environmentalist concerns and they are worried about its consequences for ecosystem. Some people argue this issue must be prioritized for the government, while other people believe there are a lot of problems for human beings which are more important than animal preserving. In this essay, we will discuss both points of view in depth. In my opinion, both perspectives are valid and they should be taken into consideration but human problems are more important than animal species extinction. To begin with, it is obvious that preserving animal species from extinction has a lot of positive benefits for environment and even people's lives. When one specie dies out it affects on other species lives; for example, in some habitats when one of bird species become extincted it leads to an increase in the population of other species which was that bird's prey. Therefore, increasing in number of certain specie cause a lot of problems for t...

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, poverty exists in every country, although the reasons and solutions may differ from place to place. There are several cause of poverty, and both government and individuals can take steps to reduce it. This essay will discuss both views after see my perspective.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some scientists think that in universe there are highly developed life on another planets. That's why they should try to sent a message and contact them. Meanwhile others think that is a not good idea and can be dangerous for us. I mostly agree, with the first opinion since it would be evidence that Earth not only plane with intelligent life and progress in science.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's life, there are many concerns about envoiromental problems and some people think ellimination of some animal and plant species is the most important one, while others think that there are other essential problems we have to care about. In my point of view, although there are many other kinds of environmental issues, animal and plant protection must be a priority for the human race.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we are living in a digital world , and it has replaced the traditional ways of doing business in a number of fields , like advertising. Now, the society is split into two halves discussing whether these digital marketing strategies are capable enough to make them a product or not. In this era of social media, what truly persuades a user is getting repeated suggestions to buy a product they browsed. It influences the human mind and encourages them to give it a try. Recently, I searched for a honeymoon package in Mexico on Safari , and now, my Instagram is full of advertisements suggesting cheap and luxurious Mexico stays. Honestly, I am just on the edge of booking one of the deals. This shows the power of commercial. Though it's true that these advertisements follow you like a shadow but due to increased awareness and how a lot of people have reported scams after clicking on these advertisements, it is common to pay no heed to them. Nowadays, scammers replicate renowned pro...

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some university students aim to study extra courses in addition to their main subjects,meanwhile, others hardly believe that it is vital to focus in core courses.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a succesful career, while other believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that deciding whether to go to university or not is challenging. While some people tend towards the viewpoint that getting employed straight after school is the way to go, I would have to support the idea that the latter is a wiser decision.

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