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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesfull at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we are living in a digital world , and it has replaced the traditional ways of doing business in a number of fields , like advertising. Now, the society is split into two halves discussing whether these digital marketing strategies are capable enough to make them a product or not. In this era of social media, what truly persuades a user is getting repeated suggestions to buy a product they browsed. It influences the human mind and encourages them to give it a try. Recently, I searched for a honeymoon package in Mexico on Safari , and now, my Instagram is full of advertisements suggesting cheap and luxurious Mexico stays. Honestly, I am just on the edge of booking one of the deals. This shows the power of commercial. Though it's true that these advertisements follow you like a shadow but due to increased awareness and how a lot of people have reported scams after clicking on these advertisements, it is common to pay no heed to them. Nowadays, scammers replicate renowned pro...

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some university students aim to study extra courses in addition to their main subjects,meanwhile, others hardly believe that it is vital to focus in core courses.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a succesful career, while other believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that deciding whether to go to university or not is challenging. While some people tend towards the viewpoint that getting employed straight after school is the way to go, I would have to support the idea that the latter is a wiser decision.

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Most employers nowadays put increasing emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualification for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, individual's social skills have become important as well as qualifications. Most companies are looking to human capabilities in dealing and interacting with others. From my experience I found that social competence is required and can have a significant impact on hiring and promotion decisions. in this essay I will discuss this point and provid examples that strength the idea.

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Climate change is a concerning global issue. Who has the main responsibility to take action to solve this problem, governments, large companies, or individuals?

In recent years, the issue of climate change has gained considerable attention in both academic and public debates. While opinions on this matter differ widely, I firmly believe that, governments, large companies and individuals have the main responsibility to take action to solve climate change problem. This essay will examine several key aspects to present a balanced and well-reasoned viewpoint.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the number of the young adults are increasing a lot and the number has gradually exceed the number of the older people. Someone think it is a good condition for the society. In my mind, I agree that the larger nuber of the youth will bring the better occassion to the society.

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate as to the school curriculum. Many people tend to think that all competitive sports should not be included in the school curriculum. I totally dispute with this opinion, from my standpoint, to engage in competitive sports plays a central role in shaping pupils' development. I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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Some students take a gap year after graduating from school to work and travel before they continue their studies. However, some people think that working prepares them more for future life than travelling. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been thought that learners take a gap year after finishing from high school to work or to see the world before continuing their studies. But, some individual think having a job during a gap year prepares them more for realistic life then travelling. I believe that, by far the most helpful for them would be travelling in this circumstance, as they can broaden their horizon and also build network compared to any benefits working can bring.

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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that government should not allow salaries above certain level. Discuss the view and give your opinion.

In recent years, many people believe that some residents can earn high salaries. However, individuals believe that governments should control salaries at certain levels. I would like to shed light on these situations.

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Do you agree or disagree that improvements in technology reduce the role of the Olympic Games?

It is often argued that improvements in technology have reduced the importance of the Olympic Games. I partially agree with this view because although technology has decreased people’s physical participation in sports, it has also helped to promote and improve athletic performance.

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Some people believe that to protect local culture, tourism should be banned in some areas whereas others think that change is inevitable, and banning tourism will have no benefits. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People all around the world are debating about protecting local culture. One side thinks that banning tourism is a must in some areas, whereas others think that we can't stop change and that it's inevitable and that there are better answers to this problem. In my opinion, I think that tourism shouldn't be banned at all as it is not only important for the economy of most countries and one of their only sources of income, but also it gives countries more recognition as well as an increase in popularity.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more and more people are dependent on technological items. Many people tend to think that reading books is more beneficial than watching TV or playing computer games. I totally agree with this idea, and I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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IN MANY COUNTRIES, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in summer holidays. What is the value of long school holidays What are the arguments in favour of shorter school holidays

In some nations, primary and secondary schools remain close for eight or more weeks. Long holidays are beneficial if weather is too hot and unbearable for students. In contrast vacations for short period of time give students long period for study.

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Some people think that public health is the responsibility of the goverment, while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been increasing debate over whether public health should be primarily the responsibility of the government or individuals themselves. While some argue that government holds the central role in maintaining public health, some believe that individuals carry greater weight for their own wellbeings. From my perspective, even though this concern largely depends on individuals, government plays a leading role in this issue.

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New technology is changing the way children spend their free time. Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

In recent years, it can be seen that the leisure time which is spent by children is changed due to new technology. While it might have some beneficial sides, I strongly argue that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, as it can cause many mental health problems in kids.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports faculties . Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people consume unhealthy food and they lose your health. Also they known't this things and nowadas, improving public is an important issue. Some people believe that increasing the number of sports facilities is the best solution, while others argue that additional measures are also necessary.This essay will discuss both views and give reasons why a combined approach may be the most effective.

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In many countries nowadays, consumer can get to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, society can get access to many things from all round of the world, even foods. Todays, people can try traditional dishes from different countries without going to that country. For example, if they want to try Japanese food than they just need to go to supermarket and make an appointment to Japanese restaurant. It’s different with 19 centuries when people should go to other country to taste some local meals. And because of that it makes a lot of people thinks is it good or not. Personally, I think it is a positive development because of several reasons.

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Young people’s behaviour is often influenced by others in the same age group. Some argue that peer pressure is important for personal growth, while other people feel that it has distinct disadvantages. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, mental health issues have occured commonly among young community. It is widely held that young people's behaviour is often influenced by people in the same age group while growing up. There is debate between whether peer pressure contributes to personal growth, or provoke bad influences. Hence, this essay will dive into each perspective to compare if one notion outweighs another.

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many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantegs of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

During the era of modernisation, museums which span across art, technology and cultural sectors have become a popular attractions to boost local and international tourism. It is widely believed the advantages of charging visitors for admission fees outweigh the disadvantages of this phenomena. To discuss the pros and cons of paying the fees, this essay will dive into two opposing perspectives respectively to form valid debate.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

Today most people in all of the world prefer to buy food which comes from overseas than eat local greens and meat. There are several reasons for this, and the main one is food's price. The government can encourage citizens to use more local products with extra taxes for imported ones or create farms and factories, which can grow with similar costs.

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