IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 1

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Today, many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects on indivi duals and society?

In this era, people spend more time away from their family due to the competitive world and increased tendency to new technologies, therefore, this essay will discuss the reasons for this problem and how it affecting to the both individuals and society.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out the history of the building they live in. What are the reason for this? How can people reasearch this?

Nowadays, people in some countries are interested about the history of the place they live. There are many reasons why this trend has become popular as learn about structure, cultural value, and more. I will discuss these reasons in the following paragraphs with possible way to conduct such research.

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go yo sporting or cultural events. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

From my prespective i do encourage people spending hundreds and thousands of euros for yo sporting or into cultural events. The reason for saying that is because it does bring benifital improvements into your life. All kind of sports has crutial role in peoples life. They motivate you and bring good thoughts , how to be an active person. Also adopting a sports not only bring you motivation. It also bring great discipline to your life. i am a sports person when i start watching Combact sports throught television i got the motivation to being part of the sport. That is how i started MMA traning. If you have a keen intersest in improving your lifestyle its absolutley fine to spend money on tickets, Also you need the capability to afford the ticket fair.

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Children engaged in sport are often overloaded with physical activity or get serious traumas. What are the main reasons of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Intensively, into playing sports since a young age, they are likely harmful their physical body from overloaded activities, which may face into stage of traumatising afterwards. This essay intend to discuss the possible reasons for this and explore effective solutions.

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Many people believe that children should learn financial management and budgeting at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Financial management has developed through out the years ,currently it a major branch of general science that people should at least be fimiliar with its initial elements ,Thus this subject has been a debate in the last few decades . Many indivisuals strongly believe that teenages should start learning financial sources allocation from early school stages ,on other hand numerous amount of opinions robustly recommend not burden juveniles with things that can deviate their thouts out of academic circle and thier pastimies .From my perspective i realy argue the importance of budgeting from early age as it is a crucial skill the same as other abilties . Firstly acadimic success and talent arenot suffient capibilties to achieve a balanced life , budgeting is the driving power that push the wheel . If we assume that a very talented indivisual works as a lecturer with a huge ambition to innovate however, he doesnot have the skill to allocate his expenditure in the right path due to sens...

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Many people believe that exercise is the key to a healthy life. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals think that exercise is the way to healthy lifestyle. I strongly agree that exercise is the way to be more healthier in physical and mental health, in this essay will discuss b how exercise going to made your life healthier.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of oldre people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It's widely know that, in some nations nowadays the percentages of young adults is relatively inormous compared to older people. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon .

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Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and works goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that internet access has made everything easier for students and employees to achieve their education and works goals than before. In my view, i completely agree with the given idea and it has a number of main reasons.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some argue that saving money for future is nessesary for everyone , even for young people . I totally disagreewith this statement because there is risk of inflation and people need to live now not for future

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People have to spend more and more time to travel their homes for jobs and study. What are the reasons? How can wo solve this problem?

Today, people have to allocate more time for travelling to work and to study, this problem is mostly related to the urban areas, causing of higher population. This essay will discuss reasons and solutions for this situation.

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Many mesuems charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Paying fees for use of numerous museums has been in existence for a long time now while few museums has being allowed to be used without pay. I think that charging to be admitted into a place of historic memory has many positives such as generation of capital, prolonged maintaince of services and gaining interest as a place of value.

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The funds for postgraduate research are limited; therefore some people think that the government should provide financial support. In their opinion, only scientific research should be funded, rather than other less useful subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is true that postgraduate surveys limited in terms of financial support, although some people believe that government should provide with high amount of investment on scientific research instead of funding less useful subjects. Personally, I completely agree with this statement, because science research provide with our basic necessary needs and more accessable to modern technology.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents choosing to self-educate their children at home rather than sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

I donot agree with the statement that the positive side of home schooling overrides the drawbacks of it against the traditional schools. Prospectively if a child wants to persue professional degree's such as doctor's, paramedical staff and STEM related professionals so they must have highschool certification and as today's necessity both parent's are working full time jobs to fullfill their financial needs. They can not provide best quality of education simultaneously being busy with their own careers.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health, while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that training is key to health, but others think that having a healthy diet is more important aspect. This examine will examine both perspectives, although I believe having a balanced diet is the way more important than training.

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Today many people are leaving the rural areas of their country (small villages) and moving to the big city. Give reasons for this and give problems this may cause.

The world has changed a great deal from the past. Nowadays, many people are moving to big cities.This increases populations in cities. However, this big issue that governments face. This essay will explain the reasons and problems.

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In some cities people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is replacing cars. Why is this the case? Which development do you think is better?

Choosing bicycles over cars become a rising trend in some cities, while some cities prefer cars. However, choosing to ride a bicycle in city areas, is a good development to reduce traffic congestion in urban areas, and even multiple benefits. This essay will discuss the reasons for above statement along with the examples.

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Some people think the best option is to accept a difficult situation, such as having a job they do not enjoy or not having enough money. Others believe it is better to try to make such situations better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The majority of individuals believe that difficult circumstances are just to resign and accept the outcome, while others think that they should try to make things better , and I agree with the latter idea.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Recently people are getting really obsessed about finding out the history of the house where they are residing. This essay will discuss the reasons behind it and ways to research this topic.

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Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behaviour. Discuss both views and give own opinion (Reported in 2017)

Nowadays, some people argue that the content and shows that minors watch on television affect their behavior. whilst, other believe that the amount of time spent on watching television could influence their behavior. And I strongly agree with both opinions. On the one hand, some people argue that the shows being streamed on television highly affect minors. This could be for multiple reasons, for instance, violence, swearing, and gambling. Nowadays, most shows promote violence and gambling through kids' shows. For this particular reason, minors tend to have bad manners towards adults. On the other hand, some people argue that it's the amount of time spent on television that could influence a minors behavior. This is mainly because of the amount of it takes away from family time. Taking away family time from a minor is harmful. because instead of learning manners and responsibility from their parents, they get to learn them from online content creators. Not only could it take away fam...

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today, there are various ways in which education is imparted. While some believe that homeschooling is the best option for their child’s growth, others believe that it is crucial to send children to school. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of both viewpoints and explain why I believe it is vital to send children to school.

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