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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think longer prison sentences are the best way to reduce crime, while others believe there are better alternative solutions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On a global scale, individuals hold different attitudes regarding stricter punishments in jails. Some groups of people claim that, making the duration of the bastille longer may have a significant impact on the low tendency of committing crimes in society, while proponents state that other regulations can be applied to mitigate this issue. This essay will analyse both perspectives before concluding the reason why I believe there exists a range of remedies to avert such kind of trouble.

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Some people think longer prison sentences are the best way to reduce crime, while others believe there are better alternative solutions. Discuss both views and give your opinion

On a global scale, individuals hold different attitudes regarding stricter punishments in jails. Some group of people claim that, making duration of the prison longer may have a significant impact regarding low tendency of committed crimes among society, while proponents state that other regulations can be applied to mitigate this issue. This essay will analyze both perspectives before concluding the reason why I believe there exist a range of remedies to avert such kind of trouble.

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Some people say that the best way to improve health is by increasing the number of health facilities.Others,However,say that this woud have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that the increase of the number of health facilities is the best way to improve health. However, others think that other ways should be used, since health facilities have a little effect on public health. While it may seem like it has a little effect for health, i believe it can help to improve health.

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Some people believe that to solve a problem of traffic congestions the government needs to provide free and 24/7 public transport To what extent you agree or disagree?

Large number of people around the world admit that in order to address the issues of traffic jams, the heads of the country should provide costless and 24/7 public transportation. Although it may fix the current problem, the caused consequences can make up other more substantial complications. Therefore, I strongly disagree with this view, reasons for that will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that students should work part-time while studying at university. Others believe students should focus only on their studies. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a belief that students should work in a temporary job , whilst studying at university . Others believe that students should focus on their academic performance rather than job . I personally believe that students should focus fully on their studies, because if they work at part-time job ,they will get distracted by money.

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Today, children are given more freedom than they used to have in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

There is a common belief that nowadays children have more freedom than in the past. I firmly believe that this is a negative development, as excessive freedom can distract children from their studies and expose them to harmful influences.

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it is thought by some that computers are more of hinderance than a help in society. others believe that they are such indispensable device that people would not be able to live or work in their absence. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some think that the dependence on computers weakens our society, while others desperately believe that humans could not live and develop properly without the help of computers. While i agree with the fact that it has its harms for the environment as a whole, i also believe that balance is crucial when it comes to technology, as it gives us a lot of opportunities and control humans should not miss out today.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our everyday life. Is ti positive or negative development? How should they be punished?

Advertisements are becoming more common in our daily life since it has been a reason of earn money easily. But it has both advantages and disadvantages depending on which way we watching the advertisement or we giving the advertisement. Let's talk about clearly.

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With the rise of social media, individuals are constantly exposed to the lives of others. How does this constant comparison affect people's self-esteem and overall happiness? What measures can individuals take to mitigate the negative effects of social media on their mental well-being?

Nowadays, many young people are committiing more crimes. I think that the main reason is a majority of young people are free handed. I firmly believe that every yuong person should be droven by thir parents and put extra houseworks after a school.

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some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad. do you agree or disagree

Techers play a vital role to shape every child's career. Where, few of people opine that tutors should have freindly behaviour to their scholars. others think they ought to be strict with them as their future on their tutors's hands. So they should be bad. I think freindly environment is better for growing one's . Reasons behind my perception will be examine below.

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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

In recent years, the question of whether men and women should share the household work and finances equally has become widely debated. However, some people tend to believe that it is fare to split the responsibilities, while others think that men should provide family financially and women should raise kids and take care of the household. Personally, I believe that both of genders should put as much as they can to the table.

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Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose .discuss bothe these views and give your own opinion

In these days, sports are considered as a way for us, as normal citizens, to stay healthy and boost body muscles. Therefore, some dangerous sports were purposed to be banned by some parties while some said no. This essay is written to discuss the opinion of both parties.

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Many people have suggested that young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in their local community. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It has been said that before starting a paid job, undergraduates should do social work in their neighbourhoods by supporting people who live in the area. The following essay will discuss some of the assets and drawbacks of the matter.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in someway. Why is this? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Many business adopt different strategies to meet the growing requirements of the customer. In order to be competitive in the market with respect to other brands they usually show their products in unique ways to boost their sales. I strongly agree, this is a positive approach taken by various firms across the globe.

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Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

It is often argued that grandparents should live with their children and grandchildren as a joint family while others believe that grandparent should live separate from their children.Joint family system is more traditional way but now many people believe in living separately.This essay will cover both perspective before I give my own opinion.

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The government investments in art, music and theatre is waste of money. Govt should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree ?

It is still argued whether government should invest in art, music and theatre due to some people prefer the fund should be invested in public services instead of investing in arts, music, and theatre. I personally think the investment to art, music and theatre is not a waste of money if the goverment already invest in public services area. This due to public services can be enjoyed by many people and investing in art, music and theatre are not visible.

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Governments should spend more money on public transport rather than building new roads. What is your opinion?

It is often argued that which field needs the government`s budget. Some claim that public transportation systems should take the first place in terms of getting income from the government instead of road renovations. While the state should give their attention to improve the system of public transports, I firmly believe that the quality of roads can enhance traffic and need more care.

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The best way to solve the world‘s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In modern world, a rapid proliferation of climate change and environmental pollution has become a serious issue. Some people believe that increasing the fuel prices is the only effective way to tackle with this menace, whereas others argue that other measures such as using electric cars instead of gasoline vehicles would be more beneficial. However, I personally believe that this method alone is not sufficient to manoeuvre this gigantic problem, other measures must be taken by the government which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

Health is the most important thing in today’s life and it can get effected by waste that households produced. The government need to address this issue about handling the household waste in a proper way. Most of the people are concerned about problems that are caused by household wastes.In this essay I will address some problems caused by household waste and their solutions.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities while others believe that outside of school children should be free to enjoy their lives.This essay will discuss both perspective before giving my own opinion.

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