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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The overuse of natural resources cause an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of this resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

People have been overusing natural resources to produce new styles that are in vogue. Some people may want this to continue while others, may prefer government to discourage this. I strongly agree that the government should discourage people the overuse of natural resources for the following reasons.

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In today's world many people own a smart phone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Globally, almost everyone has been able to afford a mobile phone that is able to access internet wherever they are. In this essay, I will explain whether the pros outweigh the cons.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweiht the disadvantages?

In this era, people owning mobile phones is extremely a common idea. However, there are more advantages than disadvantages if an individual owns a smartphone. This essay will describe the notion in the paragraphs below with relevant evidences.

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Some people say that now we cans see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

There are a number of people saying that movies should be enjoyed on our personal gadgets at home instead of going to cinema, while others consider that it should be full enjoyed only in theatres. This essay will explain both the perspectives in the paragraphs below, and I will also share my viewpoint.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that implementing physical education lessons in schools can tackle a widespread health problem associated with overweight people. This essay totally agrees with that idea, since it comes with certain merits for students.

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than ahigh salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the given statement?

A portion of the population debates that career satisfaction is more significant than a well-paid job. This essay totally disagrees with this statement. From my perspective, high income is an essential part of today’s world and should be maintained for both economic and educational reasons.

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than a high salary. To what extent do you agree with the given statement?

Job satisfaction has become a subject of debate in recent years. While I can sympathize with both sides of the argument , I fundamentally believe that high income is an essential component of employee engagement and should be maintained for economic and educational purposes.

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Technology has changed the way people communicatr today. Some people belive this is making our relationship stronger while others believe it is harming them. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, technology has changed the way people communicate with each other. Some people believe that this development makes relationships stronger, while others think it is harming them. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Nowadays education quality is very low. Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Others believe that it will result in loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both the views.

Nowadays, more and more people are moving to various countries, and it gives rise to creating cosmopolitan cities. From my standpoint, this trend is essential for individuals' development. I will elaborate on my reasons for thinking so in the following essay.

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some people believe money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider money the best present for youngsters , but others argue this viewpoint. While giving money as a gift to young ones could teach them money management and be more independent. But I think having some cash in hand without any hard work can spoil them.

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Some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for Human's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

As a law about animals has been issued now, most people agree that this can prevent from using animal as an experimental function. But, I personally think that, it is needed for the advancement of science, as long as it is not overuse, and this essay will explain about it.

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In some countries, women now are able to join the armed forces on equal basis with men. However, some people feel that only men should be members of the army, navy or Air Force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A widely common belieis that, rather than women, only the man should have the privilege to join in military, navy or arm force. I firmely stand against this statement and belive that women should have the equal right to build their career in this sector.

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Some people think that boys and girls should attend school together. Others feel that they should be educated separately. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Gender is another variety to categorize the people in the world. Some people arguing about the situation in various ways. Especially since as kids they try to identify them separately, some thoroughly believe boys and girls should be educated together, but others not. According to my opionion, it should not have any gender verification and they all should attend school together.

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Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Thereis a debate that every year languages get extinct, and there are a number of people claiming, life will be easier if there will be fewer languages worldwide. I completely disagree with this opinion, and will share the reasons in paragraphs below.

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the movement of people from villages to cities for work can cause serious problems in both places. What problems does this cause? What can be done about the problems?

Migration of people from the rural to urban area for better work oppurtunity is creating issues in both areas. Like, in cities increased taffic, strained public services and in villages less development and shrinking population. but this problem can be solve in both places by increasing tax and creating jobs respectively.

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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, overpopulation has put an immense burden on food supplies, which is making it difficult for the government to provide food to every citizen. The majority of people think that genetically modified food represent a solution to this challenge. Although GM food helps to increase yields, I contend that it is detrimental to human health.

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evaluate 🌿Some people believe that success in life comes mainly from hard work and determination, while others think that factors such as money and family background are more important. 🌿Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The term "Success" has evolved so widely, classified into different categories such as financial stability, career, education and many more have been discovered now a days. I firmly believe that reaching up to a certain level, hard work and perseverance are the key factors. Apparently others support that: references, family background and monetary levels are the prime reasons, that contribute towards the success.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this becom a positive or negative development?

In this modern world, it has been claimed that there are number of people interacting with each other differently as compared to past years, and the reason why is technogical development. There are several ways in which types of relationships has been affected, and it will be described in the below paragraphs. In my opinion, this has become a negative development.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks

Globalization has presented us with the number of challenges and decisions.

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the world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or the same condition of work for life.discuss the causes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for workin the future

Nowadays, human beings cannot sustain with a single job as well as same condition at work.Changing of the nation fastly in the terms of work and working conditions is caused by earning less salaries and working for long hour shifts.Therefore, I totally suggest that companies should increase pay of the workers for them to stay at work for a long period.

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