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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by some that it is the responsibility of parents to show their offspring how an honest member of society is to behave, while others feel that this should happen at school. This essay believes that although parents can encourage this type of behaviour from an early age, a school is better because it can reach every child.
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some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable to say that, technological advancement in the entertainment field has changed our lives completely. Large sections of society have opted to watch movies on their smart phone rather than going to a movie theatre, however, some sections of society still believe that it is exciting to watch movie on wide screen cinema hall. The following paragraphs would shed light on both approaches before making final note on my perspective with suitable example.
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In many cities, there is a lack of space to develop and as a result, in order to modernize, old buildings are demolished and replaced with new buildings. What are the disadvantages of knocking down old buildings? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In many metropolises, older buildings are torn down to make way for newer buildings, as well as to make up for the tight space and as a way to advance into the modern world. There are a few downsides to replacing older buildings, albeit there are some benefits as well.
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Many People say that applying heavy taxes to industries will prevent industrial pollution. Other believe that there are other effective solutions to curb the industrial pollution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Include appropriate examples in your response, if necessary.

Industries play a predominant role in polluting the environment. However, although some people believe that levying high taxes to industries will prevent industrial pollution, I believe that there are other implementable solution to stop the issue of pollution emitted from industries.
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If children behave badly should their parents take responsibility and also be punished? State your answer and give your reasons. OR If a five year old commits a crime (any kind), should his/her parents accept responsibility and how should they be punished. What is the age of a child when parents no longer have the responsibility of a child’s behavior?

A child learns from their parents and provides an initial learning environment by parents. It is an ongoing debate on whether parents should be held responsible for their children's misdeeds and who should be punished for this misbehaviour. My opinion is surrounded by some arguments in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Children, nowadays, are spending nearly all their time inside buildings as a result of the busy pace of contemporary life. This essay will argue that it is of utmost importance that young children are taught to value our natural habitat so that they will protect it as adults, and also for their improved health.
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Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves.Some people think that it is good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a controversial issue as to whether institutions should hire different types of sports as a means of advertising their products, which brings myriads of benefits, or, whether if goods of organizations display on the sports ground, it will reduce selling the item and the company as well. From my perspective, advertising various brands of the organization might bring a positive outcome rather than negatives.
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Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion

It is generally seen that in this materialistic world people addicted to purchase new things for fulfil their needs. According to my ideology this trend has negative impacts on an individual's life as well as on our environment.
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The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The purpose behind making the traffic rules of government is to reduce the chances of accidents and improve the safety of the people travelling on roads. Along with rules government also enforce punishments for not obeying the rules. I personally assert on the fact that if public will be given stricter punishments for driving offences that will reduce the probability of accidents on the road. Driving safely on the roads is really important as this a matter of someone's life and death.
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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that young people should be taught about how to become an ethical individual in society by their parents. Others claim that it is a responsibility of the education institute. I, personally, believe that parent are the most important people in the children’s life because they spend most of their time with them and they always try to copy their parents instinctively.
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Some people believe that educations success is based on good teachers and other believe that it depends on students attitude. Dicuss both view

People have different views on how students can be successful in academics. While some believe that it is dependent on teachers, And others think that it is a strictly attitude towards education.
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Life is now better that it was 100 years ago. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Life has indeed changed how the humanity works and operates. Many people believe that it is better to live in the current life rather than a century ago. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement, due to the rise in technology and world trade, which will be discussed further in the essay below.
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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

According to the report of The Times magazine, an average yearly income of the entertainment industry is calculated as 100 trillion US dollars. In this contemporary era, a massive number of the population addicted to entertainments. Although spending money on entertainment is beneficial for people, it has brought considerable negative effects on society.
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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Nowadays, people prefer living in small families, which is the reason to change their family structure and besides the responsibilities of male and female in building a family has become very important. According to me the perspective about the ongoing changes in the family is unnecessary. Moreover, this has more negative impacts rather that positive sides.
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Stress-related illnesses are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest.

Nowadays, people are suffering from sickness due to stress getting rise day by day. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is over usage of technology and traffic congestion. However, this essay will also propose viable solutions to these problems by healthy activity and using public transport instead of own vehicles.
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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

There is a book by the name of ‘paradoxes of choices’ which notices the different choices we can select in our daily routine. As same as the book, I agree with the statement that people have lots of selections these days, although it can be wrong in some cases. In this essay the different ideas about the subject will be discussed.
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Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

Top ranked universities attract graduate students from across the world. Although some of the students relocate to a different place, away from home, for studies. Many live with their immediate family members. In this essay we will discuss few advantages and disadvantages in both the situations.
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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider working for the same organization during all their years of employment while some have a thought that it is better to be employed by different organizations throughout their working lives. While both these options have their advantages and disadvantages, I opine that it is better to work for different organizations just because of the experience and exposure one can get.
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Some people want the main purpose of television should be education while others think that TV should be for entertainment only. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

With the advent of the technology, the use of televisions and radio has been increased drastically. However, people have different perspectives about what should be the television aimed for, whether it should be gaining the education or for refreshments. Well, this essay is an attempt to discuss both views and gives its own opinion at the end.
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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house to live in, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house?

The type of accommodation which an individual or group chooses depends on a variety of factors. Probably the most significant of these is age. In the remainder of this essay I aim to explain why, in many cultures, renting tends to be more suitable for younger adults whereas purchasing a home makes sense for anyone in their thirties, forties or even fifties.
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