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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people have claimed that more financial resources should be allocated to universe study to find out other habitable places for human, due to the increasingly harsh life on Earth. From my perspective, that budget should be spent in protecting the environment instead.

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Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea the women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been an ongoing debate about the deciding who is most responsible for the children’s growth. Some people opine that the father’s plays a more crucial duty than the mothers. However, the women are not ready to accept the responsibility. I strongly support this view. The essay will discuss my stance with the arguments in below paragraphs.

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Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?

Every country has different methods of crime dealings. It is believed by a majority of citizens that fixed punishment is a determined way for all types of violations. Nevertheless, this treatment possesses benefits as well as downsides.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems.

In the modern century, there is a vast amount of significant changes in the values of the family. As a result, in some countries, marriages are arranged by relatives. However, in other countries, individuals can choose a marriage partner by himself. This essay is going to discuss this phenomenon by using examples to demonstrate the points.

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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?

In this burgeoning era, countries around the world are producing goods in mass quantities; however, it is often wondered by many people that increasing production is the ultimate objective of any country. Let us delve deeper into this to understand it well.

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The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

After the industrial evolution, a huge percentage of every country's population, fled to big cities in order to find labour in factories. From that point on, more and more people have been moving to cities, creating a problem in the housing industry. Some individuals claim that the government is the only one that can fix this situation, while others argue that they cannot intervene in the free recession. In my opinion, the officials can and should do something about that. In this essay I will discuss both views.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that it has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society?

Ever since industrialization, there has been an upward trend in consumerism. However, with the rise in per capita income of the people, shopping is gaining the status of a leisure activity. And this has both merits and demerits, as believed by some individuals. This essay will discuss the causes of increasing popularity of shopping, as well as the effects of the increased popularity on individuals and society.

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Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The appearance of advertising has gained a popularity of public attention as it is everywhere around us. Some people believe promoting is useful when looking for a particular product, whereas some others claim advertising unintentionally influences our private lives. Although I concur with some possible drawbacks that advertising brings, but I incline that the advantages would outweigh the downsides.

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some parents think its good to have their children mobile phones, others disagree? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's world communication and its relevant tools are counted as basic needs of anybody. Having a cell phone has become very normal, but how about kids? Should they also have cell phones? Some people believe that kids should have this device on behalf of adults, but others hold that it is not a necessity. In this essay, we will argue about this topic and discuss both opinions.

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Improvements in health, education and trend are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There have been many sectors in a few nations which require the improvements. The involvement of the health, academic institutions and system of the poor nations is the key parameter for the improvement. However, the authority of the developed nation should help the poor state. I strongly support this view. The essay will discuss my stance with the arguments in below paragraphs.

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The government should lower the budget on the arts to allocate more money to education. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed that the authority should confer prominence spending money for literacy than on the arts. This essay will agree with above trend and gives an example to support the statement.

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Nowadays, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can the government do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It is irrefutable, that innumerable unessential items has been manufacturing in the factories. In my opinion, I do believe with this notion, it is possible because there are manifold unauthorized plants are producing these items in a massive quantity, and the lack of awareness program among the public. Thus, the government must ban these mills and run, the information centre to aware of the public.

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In many countries children are encouraged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

The children, nurturing methods certainly revolutionize as time passes. Some people opine that it is good to involve the tender at an early age in the part time job which provides them a money for their further education and an experience. However, others think that it is totally wrong. The essay will discuss my stance with arguments in below paragraphs.

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Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increase in case has been an important issue in humanity. To a certain extent I agree that solving this problem is by placing criminals in jail. However, I believe that education is an effective method to reduce lawlessness rate.

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Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?

It is undeniable that the world is developing rapidly, so that people’s quality of life has improved enormously over the decades. Remarkable factors for this change are due to upmarket infrastructure, advanced medical facilities, and various prospects taken by the government to boost people’s living standards. However, some people believe, artificial intelligence (AI) results of the Industrial Revolution may even conquer people’s daily function. I strongly concur with this thought, that the quality of life has grown when compared to centuries ago, which will be discussed in the following passage.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether to stay happy or not is someone's own responsibility, as thought of a few. While, others contradict and argue that there are many other things that are considered to play a role in this regard. In my opinion, I believe that several factors including; social, environmental and financial, have a considerable role to make an individual happy.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately,learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Wouldn't it be a waste of time to learn foreign languages if they were translated quickly and easily by computer? Nowadays people think that if computer translate faster and clearly, not needed to learn other languages. I totally disagree with this opinion. We can be known countries history, culture and others by learning foreign languages. This essay will discuss advantages of learning foreign languages.

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Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is better to study their chosen occupations in high school rather than regular subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some students believe that it is better to study their desired occupations in high school. Although this is an interesting thought, I do not agree with the idea that the young pursue their favourite career and refuse to study regular subjects.

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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In myriad nation's tourism has become the most significant source of income, however, its deleterious impacts cannot be unnoticed. In my opinion, I agree with this notion, because it is arising inevitably environmental problems and abolishing the heritage.

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Some pople think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work intead of bering put behind bars. To what extend do you agree?

Generally, most people tend to have different opinion on each issue, even whether how to deal with the criminals who have been convicted by the law. For some, they may argue that they should be made to do any jobs for the community for free. Similarly, I partially agree with such claim, as it would be beneficial to the society, yet the prisoners must be contained in a restricted area, as it would prevent any further harm from such group of people. The examples and cases would illustrate my perspective to the best.

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