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IELTS Advantages and Disadvantages Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In spite of the many advances women have made in education and employment, yjey continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. in your view, what shoule be done to promote equality for men and women in the workplace?

In many parts of the world, there is now greater equality between working men and women. Nevertheless, women still tend to earn less and enjoy fewer promotions than men. Some would argue that this situation will correct itself over time. However, in my view, there is much that can be done to address the problem constructively.

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Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers.Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days food travels many miles, as the farmer's export their food across the world to satisfy the consumer demand.Although some people think stopping this practise would benefit the economy and the environment, I believe the negative impacts would not justify such a change.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so.

Nowadays, Its commonly seen that parents motivate their children to do part-time jobs in their free time. Although many may see it as a positive phenomenon, but this is not a trend without drawbacks. Both merits and demerits will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some belief of experts is children should starts learning a secondary language at primary school more than secondary school. This essay agrees with this opinion, since the brain cells of children have been improved and they have not confused between each language.

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In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

With increasing employment opportunities across the world, people are finding it beneficial to move to different places, instead of staying in a particular place throughout. It is quite interesting to explore and experience various cultures of many people, hence people tend to move from one place to another often. Fixating at one place has its own advantages and disadvantages.

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University students are increasingly studying aboard as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying aboard outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a general trend now a day that lots of university students are studying aboard. Despite of such great competitions and high cost of study, many students prefer to move to a different country to get an advance degree. In my opinion, students should opt to study in different countries, despite of some financial crunches they may face.

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More and more students are choosing to study at college and universities in foreign countries. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

In the contemporary era, the trend of going abroad to study is progressing at an exponential pace. The education plays an imperative role to build a successful career. Therefore, students are going to foreign for doing best education with advance technology. It has both positive and negative impact, but I personally believe that it has more advantages rather than its drawbacks.

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Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part-time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children in doing so?

In some countries, teenagers are motivated by their parents to work while attending school or university. This essay will discuss both positive and negative aspects of doing a part-time job on children.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, the rate at which individuals stay a year at home within the period of completing high school and enrolling in college has become widely popular. Therefore, this essay will discuss the merits and demerits of this action.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Over the last few years, there has been a significant increase in the number of people travelling to inhabitable or hostile places. Most of them are driven by a passion to achieve something that few others have been able to achieve. They want to experience the adrenalin rush that such expeditions bring on.

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The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Individuals now have instant accessibility to information through the world wide web globally with the use of digital gadgets, a great proportion of this insight is at no cost. Quick opportunities to access information and bringing solutions to problems from the knowledge acquired is a merit, nonetheless exposure of children to information beyond their understanding is a key demerit.

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some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to do other things. Do the advantage outweighs disadvantage

These days, many people have a tendency to choose momentary occupations that make them have more spare times to do other works. Despite some obvious drawbacks of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantages.

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Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

This essay is about the consumer goods and how it becomes an essential part in professional and general life. In this essay we will argue about the both elements, to what extent we are agreed of disagreeing. However, in the era of 21 centuries, everything related to general life is important for every human being.

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some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvanatages of a family run business

Family run businesses are believed to be the most successful ones. Early exposure will be advantageous in the development of the skills needed in the business, while it will be disadvantageous for an individual to run the business, with a lack of passion.

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Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their handwriting skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?

Many people believe that handwriting skills are no longer important in this era of technology. So they opine that children do not require investing time to hone their handwriting skills, especially when they will most likely type instead of writing for the rest of their life. Unfortunately, this opinion is misguided. I strongly believe that handwriting is important even in today’s digital world.

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Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days food travels many miles as farmers' exports their food across the world to satisfy the consumer demand.Although some people think stopping this practise would benefit the economy and the environment, I believe the negative impacts would not justify such a change.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

Many university students routinely study in other countries around the world as part of their degree. Although students will often struggle with cultural and linguistic challenges while abroad, they will also gain significant life experiences that will reward them later on in their careers. In my opinion, Students are far better off having studied in a different country, despite the challenges that they inevitably face.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken legally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning one language in the world?

English has become eminent globally due to advancement in the field of tourism. Advantages of having one language will end language barrier. However, other languages will extinct, ultimately, variety of cultures will end.

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Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern days, the consumer goods play a vital role in the peoples lives. In this essay shed some light on the pros and cons regarding final products, then followed by my own opinion.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world ?

It is argued by some people that English, which is currently the most speaking languages will diminish the other speaking languages in the coming years. Also, they feel that tourism plays a vital role in this situation. This essay firstly, outlines the advantages of having one common language and secondly, speaks about their drawbacks.

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