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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While some people are with the view that art should be included as the most important subject in primary learning, quite a few people oppose and believe it is completely worthless. In my opinion, art should be part of fundamental education to ensure the knowledge based development of the children; however, this essay will discuss both views.

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Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

In the modern world, many people are willing to explore the space in form to colonise or search for other planets. However, others feel that the government should subsidise other projects rather than these activities, as they are not beneficial for the human kind or other areas such as education and health care are more essential than researching the outer area. Personally, I believe that the authorities should pay attention to the other planets in order to collect the information for the ordinary people.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

Media exposure of famous people is agreed to have been denoting a strong aversion on the youngsters by a lot people. This essay will explain the extent at which I strongly agree that most children these days can be negatively impacted with gaining assess to viewing or reading about most celebrities.

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Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company, while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although many individuals claim that senior labour force is beneficial for the sake of a corporation, others think that young workers are far better. In this essay, I agree that hiring old people have a competitive advantage over hiring a young worker. This essay will discuss both points of views.

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Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advent of globalization, the world is more connected than ever before, and this permits people to travel around the globe. However, this generates conflicts among locals and tourists regarding cultures, including values. From my point of view, international tourism has created many opportunities, besides; it gives knowledge of understanding about cultures rather than constructing stress.

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7.Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think the modern world makes people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The modernisation has made some individuals either to be more reliant to each other or, conversely, to be independent of the other. However, in my viewpoint, as the time has progressed, the modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past. This essay will investigate both very topical debates as a deeper reason.

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Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and they should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

Tax is the main source of income for the central government and the economy of the nation is highly dependent on it. Every citizen of a country contributes to it in various ways like Income and Goods and service sales excise. However, few people advocate that we should not pay any money. In my opinion, money is essential for the development of a country and cannot be avoided. This essay will discuss both the views before giving my final verdict on this opinion.

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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Women should be treated fairly when it comes to Job opportunities. In our country, there are a couple of profiles where Men are considered to be fit for the role, like The Army or Police Officer. I completely agree with the fact that nowadays females are equally talented, can perform better. They should not be treated anything less than a Man.

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is recommended for a city to have attractive buildings. Though, it is not mandatory to have such a framework. In my view, Money should be spent equally on all the elements, like Infrastructure, Healthcare and Education. We shall be discussing both the view in the following paragraphs.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accomplained by an adult What is your opinion?

Nowadays, the crime rate has increased all over the world. Indeed, the late-night outside the house is not safe for teenagers, however, it is the responsibility of the officials to protect people. In my opinion, the government has to take necessary actions to stop violence rather than imposing a curfew on youngsters.

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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been heated debate on running of libraries for years now. Book centres should be closed as there are better alternatives that are readily available. I agree that, these places should be replaced by new and advanced computer centres.

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Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities. To what extent do you agree?

Recreational activities such as sports, cinemas etc., are mandatory for the development of healthier communities. Many people among us believe that giant business groups or entrepreneurs should organize several sports or cultural events open to the common public. I completely agree with this view because it is beneficial for both the companies and natives.

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5.Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Planting many trees everywhere could increase healthy environment for society while others argue that building housing must be a necessity for them. However, I totally agree that the drawbacks of having more houses will outweigh the benefits which will be investigated below.

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education, from primary to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

It is often said that the right to education must be granted to people across all strata of the society and schools and colleges must be free to all. However, while I believe that schools must be free for all, colleges must charge tuition fee for the admission.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources and money, so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, it is argued that the computers are substitutes of libraries while others valued the books. In my opinion, books should be highly praised than technologies' gadget in terms of abundant sources and affordable resources.

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In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time because one distracts the other. Is it realistic to combine them at the same time? Support your opinion with examples.

Although such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement. A constructive dialogue on - distractions such as employment may affect a person's learning process - can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, in this essay I'm explaining why I agree with the above statement.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Evaluation method of students' performance has always been an area of contention around the globe. Some set of people considers that formal examinations are the best way to judge the performance of the student. Some folks believe that continual assessment such as course work and projects are the right way of evaluating the performance. In my opinion, I believe that both the ways are reliable in assessing student’s performance.

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Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibility towards our society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In this day and age, many people think that their primary duty is to pay tax only, while there are others who feel that we have more responsibilities to our community. In my opinion, I believe that paying tax is one of our many responsibilities and there are other ways in which we can serve the public.

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

Highlighting products an influential method to attract customers. A great deal of goods is displayed worldwide by several companies. I believe that it has vital impacts on our choices. Furthermore, it has both positive and negative influences on our daily lives.

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Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it would cause problems for younger. Do you agree or disagree? I

Recently, the debate on allowing people to work after the age of 60 has become heated. As far as I am concerned, I do not think that this would cause problems for younger.

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