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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 8.5

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It is argued that mobile phones and other electronic devices have no place in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, mobile phones have become very popular and easily available throughout the world. This has become a part of our everyday life.Most of the students from across the globe have access to smartphones and they have been using these electronic devices not only for educational purposes but also for personal uses. However, I believe, that mobile phones should not be allowed in classrooms, especially in primary level because it distracts the student's mind and also affect the effective interaction.

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It is argued that mobile phones and other electronic devices have no place in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Nowadays, mobile phones have become very popular and easily available throughout the world. These have become a part of our everyday life.Most of the students from across the globe have access to smartphones and they have been using these electronic devices not only for educational purposes but also for personal uses. However, I believe, the mobile phones should not be allowed in classrooms, especially in primary level because it distracts the students and also affect the effective interaction.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree/disagree?

The health care system is pressurised to solve the problems caused by an increasing number of overweight people. Certain people believe that incorporating more physical education classes in the school schedule is key in dealing with this issue. I completely agree the above statement because this can help grow interest in exercising and act as a long-term approach.

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Some believe that more academic subjects, such as chemistry, physics and history, should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people insist / opine that the school curriculum should give more importance to academic subjects like history or physics, while others argue that the emphasis should be on imparting practical skills. In my opinion, subjects such as science, mathematics and history prepare children for a brighter future and hence they should be given more importance.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

People’s views differ as to whether or not electronic games exert detrimental influences on individuals who play them. While there are some undeniable advantages of playing video games, I believe that this kind of recreational activity is more likely to have harmful impacts on users.

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are several threats to living in our environment. This has led to some individuals to say that increasing the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles like trucks or buses, is the most effective method to solve many of the environmental problems. I completely agree with this view. The reasons for my opinion will be discussed below.

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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of accessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinions.

A big number of people in our country still believes in black magic. It is believed by some individuals that, we should focus on discovering options to live with global climate change rather than trying to prevent it. In my opinion, if we do not stop the weather changes now, the outcome will be perilous in coming days. This is why, I disagree to the aforementioned statement.

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The tendency of news reporters in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Correspondents, at present, tend to demonstrate the current issues and political upheavals to the public rather than positive advancements in the area, which is deleterious for the people and communities as well. I, partially, second with this viewpoint because media channels focus on both sides which bring a positive impact to individuals as well as the community.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

People’s views differ as to whether or not electronic games exert pessimistic effects on individuals who play them. While there are some undeniable advantages of playing video games, I believe that kind of recreational activity is more likely to have harmful impacts on users.

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The government should control the internet to reduce cyber-crime and ensure safety of users. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The increased use of internet has given rise to many serious problems such a cyber bullying, hacking cyber fraud etc. I agree with the notion that, government should take some steps to stop the undue usage of internet.

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Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In this day and age, it is irrefutable to say that education plays a pivotal in every student's career by building a personality, improving knowledge and skills. To a certain extent, I agree that university studies helps graduates get better jobs. However, I also believe that there are other variety of benefits of college education for both students and society.

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Libraries are a waste of money, therefore, computers should be used to replace them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A library consists of a large number of books and considered a place which comprises much information. However, with recent technological advancements, some people argue that funding for libraries should be reduced, and introducing computers to public usage is the best option. I think introducing computers and tablets are a good option.

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It is commonly believed that some people are with certain talents for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is indisputable that there are some people who were born with gifted abilities. While some people argue that any youngster can be educated to be a successful athlete or musician, others believe that those people are amazing as they were born. In my opinion, I totally agree that anybody can succeed if they keep learning and practicing regularly.

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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural background living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. Do you agree?

There is a plethora of various cultures and nationalities from all over the world. Critics argue that grouping some of them together will boost the country’s development. Although there are two sides to this argument, from my own perspective, there are several reasons to why this suggestion might be effective, which will be discussed in this essay as well as limitations.

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Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phone, while others disagree. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A few parents believe that children should own a mobile handset while others have a different point of view. The use of mobile phones by minors have been associated with major academic distractions, lack of family time and other vices, the only benefit a child derives from owning a handset is easily accessible. Hence, I disagree that children be given phones.

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Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phone, while others disagree. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A few parents believe that children should own a handheld device while others have a different point of view. Using mobile phones by minors have been associated with major academic distractions, lack of family time and other vices, the only benefit a child derives from owning a handset is easily accessible. Hence, I disagree that children be given phones.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The advancement in technology has enabled people to have many options that are available to them. In my opinion, I certainly agree that the more than necessary options can become cumbersome. This problem is encountered in our daily life, for example, when buying a small personal item such as a smartphone or a large ticketed item such as an automobile.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The ambiance should be protected by the people because governments and the mammoth industries would not alone solve the problem of the atmosphere. I, holistically, disagree with this viewpoint due to the importance of citizen's helping hands in protecting the earth without them all the initiatives of authorities would prove unproductive.

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The ambiance should be protected by the people, because governments and the mammoth industries would not alone solve the problem of the atmosphere. I, holistically, disagree with this viewpoint due to the importance of citizen's helping hands in protecting the earth, without them all the initiatives of authorities would prove unproductive.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often suggested that affluent countries should provide supplies to impoverished countries that are experiencing natural disasters. I agree with this view because it is a moral obligation and it reduces the spread of diseases.

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