You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is in regards to the faulty
credit
card
statement
that I received your bank today. My name is Sunaina Khanna and I have been using
hdfc
credit
card
services from past 1 year.My
credit
card
id is "
sunaina
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Sunaina
.
khanna
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Khanna
" and
credit
card
number is CNFPK000007878.
Although
my contact details are mentioned in the portal
,
Accept space
,
but I would still like to mention my telephone number
incase
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in case
needed.It is 7878990033. The
statement
that I received is completely faulty and it has put me in a lot of stress.The
statement
mentions that I have purchased a diamond ring worth Rs. 1
lakh
and a
rolex
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Rolex
watch worth Rs. 2
lakhs
, and the bill mentioned
on
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in
this
statement
is 3,15,000 INR. I can confirm you that I have only spent 15000
rs
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
yrs
.
this
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This
month through the
credit
card
and I am completely shocked by the rest of the purchases mentioned in the
statement
. I would like you to look into the matter and check if it is a fraud or a mistake from the bank's end.I want the bank to send me the correct
credit
card
statement
for
this
month and
releave
release, as from one's grip
release
me from
this
irrelevant stress. I am expecting an immediate response and a very quick resolution to
this
issue. Thanks and Regards, Sunaina Khanna
Submitted by abcde on

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