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Some people work for the organization all their working life.others think that ot is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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We often witness, some people working in an same concern until their retirement.Whereas others tend to change their
work
 environment regularly, to explore various opportunities. Some people
work
 in same concern, as of being traditional thinkers, who are pretty hesitant to explore other opportunities. Many factors
such
 as friendly management, healthy
work
 space environment- tend to retain them to these concerns. Seeking
this
 as an opportunity, many concerns are manipulating these employees, by increasing their workload and under-paying them.For
insistance
an occurrence of something
instance
insistence
assistance
,
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,
at past
,
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,
cotton mills were present in and around India.Many people worked
on
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in
 these mills were either under-paid with increased workload until retirement. But the economic recession in 1995,
withnessed
be a witness to
witnessed
oock
 -down of these mills. Many employees didn't receive pensions
,
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,
inspite
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in spite
,
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,
of having a service span of more than 30 years.
On the other
hand many
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hand, many
 employees nowadays, doesn't retain in an same company for
an
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a
 decade. They keep on exploring other concerns, owning to better salary features and promotional offers.
This
 has enabled many employees to reach heights in
un explored
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an explored
unexplored
feilds
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field
fields
. A survey stated that 90% of employees often change their
work
 space to explore and integrate. To conclude
,
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,
in my opinion,
its
it is
it's
 better to explore with various organizations, to gain better knowledge and
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enforcement work
. So that they would be updated in
this
 present scenario
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