employers sometime ask people applying for a job personal information such as hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single.some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree.

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being

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

been

developing and competitive in business field, employers has rife a new trend while interviewing

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new employee, the perfect amalgamation of professional and personal skills or hobbies with marital status is being selected. While some people take it as conspicuous whereas other mark it as irrefutable

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To start with an assent many managers

ask

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asks

the employees to mention their interests and hobbies with marital status, as it is being in trend to celebrate the various events just for the sake of marketing

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for

instance as

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instance, as

many companies and

organisations celebrates

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organisations, celebrates

their annual day and weeks by organising various events, so people get aware about the product and business field.

However

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According to an empirical survey

this

is being revealed that unmarried people take less vacation and are more assiduous towards their work

Although

, some of the population is being irrefutable; people

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

or get the

job

opportunities because they mention their personal details as being

divorce

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divorced

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widower and lower cast with the results that, people got the

job

on the basis sympathetic

act

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act, hence

hence

for instance

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india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

this

is being recorded in the national law of constitution about the

weightage

a season's yield of wine from a vineyard

vintage

witch

and

particular more number

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a particular number

particular number

particular most number

of seats in the jobs for lower

casts

pecuniary reimbursement to the winning party for the expenses of litigation

costs

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divorces and widowers. The homosexual has no number of seats in any field and if it mistakenly revealed people make

funny comment

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funny comments

a funny comment

on the community

located at or attached to

till they would not quit from the

job

or commit suicides In conclusion

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job

selections should be non biased and equal for all the communities

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Personal information should be optional before an interview and should be kept confidential if the employee do want to disclose

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job

selection should be on the basis of experience and professional skills.

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employers sometime ask people applying for a job personal information such as hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single.some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree.

Fully explain your ideas

Some people say that increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries, students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?