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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or desagree?

#salary #job #satisfaction #desagree
It is argued that big
salary
 is essential for the masses rather than satisfied jobs.
Although
 I agree with
this
 statement that handsome amount of
rennevation
the act of improving by renewing and restoring
renovation
innovation
 plays a significant role in every
human's
Suggestion
human
 life, I cast light on formal statement in
upcoming paragraphs
Suggestion
the upcoming paragraphs
.
To begin
 with, the
first
 and the important reason is that highest
salary
 is a helpful source of various
sactors
a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle
sectors
s actors
actors
sects
.
This
 is due to the fact that, people can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their daily requirements as
nowadays world
Suggestion
the nowadays world
 is facing problems
such
 as
inflation
Suggestion
Inflation
, poverty and unemployment.
Moreover
, with the highest income one can make his future bright while
savin
an act of economizing; reduction in cost
saving
 money from his wages.
For example
, government employees have the biggest amount of wages, they live a great lifestyle and make their
offspring
Suggestion
offspring's
 future bright while giving them all the
eminities
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
. That's why handsome amount of
salary
 is crucial for every individual.
Furthermore
, with the highest
salary
, one can earn name and fame in his life.
This
 is owing to the fact that a person is doing a
sandatory
requiring sitting or little activity
sedentary
 job for the whole day to complete the needs and myriads of dreams of his family members, which is the greatest responsibility of the person. Apart from
this
, after doing
hardwork
Suggestion
Hard work
Hardwork
 and facing several
circumstances it
Accept comma addition
circumstances, it
 is extremely necessary for the masses to earn a big
salary
.
Thus
, one can complete ones all the dreams and ones future becomes bright. To conclude, I totally agree that a person who gets more
salary
 can live a very high status of lifestyle as compare to job satisfaction.
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