The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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the reponsibilities
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responsibilities
maried
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married
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people's
chore
by gender, Fix the agreement mistake
chores
child
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number
and Use synonyms
hours
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reveal
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growing
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the growing
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an effect
work
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the work
time
of families.
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men
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hours
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hours
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while
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the female
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apply
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the size
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apply
women
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women's
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hours
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than
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more than
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third
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child
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children
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female's
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men
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the reponsibilitiy
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responsibility
responsibilities
care
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to care
of
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for
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the child
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children
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number
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time
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least
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the least
growing
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the growing
child
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number
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child
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pass
time
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men
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men
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does
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do
resposibility
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responsibility
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for
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incured
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incurred
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Vocabulary: Replace the words child, number, hours, time, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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