The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The diagram graph shows
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the reponsibilities
reponsibilities
of Correct your spelling
responsibilities
maried
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married
people
weekly Change noun form
people's
chore
by gender, Fix the agreement mistake
chores
child
number
and hours
. A glance at the graph reveal
that Change the verb form
reveals
growing
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the growing
child
number
has effect
on Add an article
an effect
work
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the work
time
of families.
Firstly
, The graph illustrates female
gender are more activities than Fix the agreement mistake
females
men
. First diagram work time
is Correct article usage
a totally
totally
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total
50
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of 50
hours
which is without children. The male gender works under 20 hours
, while
female
is 30 Add an article
the female
a female
hour
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hours
in
a week. As Change preposition
apply
size
of Add an article
the size
family
is growing Add an article
the family
a family
such
as 1-2 child
, the
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apply
women
work Change noun form
women's
time
increase significantly over
50 Change preposition
by over
hours
than
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more than
men
do. The third
graphs
shows which is over 3 Fix the agreement mistake
graph
child
the Fix the agreement mistake
children
females
chore peak at 60 Change to a genitive case
female's
females'
hours
. However
, men
do not have Correct article usage
the reponsibilitiy
reponsibilitiy
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responsibility
responsibilities
care
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to care
of
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for
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the child
a child
child
.Fix the agreement mistake
children
In contrast
,Change the article
a
the
number
of working time
is least
, as Correct article usage
the least
growing
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the growing
child
number
.
In short, when the family get a child
, the women passing
more Wrong verb form
pass
time
than men
do. Moreover
, men
does
not have Change the verb form
do
resposibility
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responsibility
about
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for
child
care, all chore and other activities were incured
by women.Correct your spelling
incurred
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Vocabulary: Replace the words child, number, hours, time, men with synonyms.
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