Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Modern world today, making friends is becoming incredibly easy because of the internet.People are divided into two as some think that online

friendship

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is not genuine

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whereas others consider offline friends are better.

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in my opinion

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I consider, true

friendship

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can find everywhere

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place does not matter. On the one hand

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some people argue that building relationships through social networking is real as there is no physical background required to build any relationship.

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eventhogh

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all

communication including

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communication, including

sharing feelings and emotions has

occured

come to pass

occurred

on virtual medium without no direct contact

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the

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grows in their mind.

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thre

in or at that place

there

their

is no place for

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To illustrate, there

are

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strong

friends

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friends'

circle has been established and work for

good cause

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a good cause

even they are not physically together.

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many strongly believe in online

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digital

eara

a period marked by distinctive character or reckoned from a fixed point or event

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, old schools still believe in the face to face relationship since they consider it is pure.

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means

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other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

party can meet each other in person and have real conversation which result in knowing between them more on

personal level

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a personal level

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this

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ensures authenticity of the relationship and may

takes

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take

it to the

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level.

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in reality everyone can see millions of

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examples

of offline

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which goes really well.

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I consider making friends is a virtue only a few can

does

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it either through electronic media or real conversation.Whatever it may

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idea

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the idea

is that true

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will stand until it has no selfish motives. In conclusion, society is segregated into two based on how to make friends.In my

viewpoint I

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viewpoint, I

believe any kind of

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suits until a person can maintain it well.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

260 words

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