While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

should
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Should
the business owner give personal attitudes more importance than other skills that are related to the work itself while employing a new employee?
if
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If
give
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given
personal skill more attention than
other
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the other
->
this
could
emplyee
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
employ
imply
some one
a human being
someone
who has nice attitude but bad tech skills,
this
will make the development
proceess
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
process
processes
proceeds
in the company much slower because he will need more time to learn things or to apply his knowledge.
if
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If
give
Suggestion
given
technical skills more attention than other skills, could
employe
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
employ
imply
employed
some one
a human being
someone
with bad communication skills and have
bad attitude
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a bad attitude
bad attitudes
-> even they have an outstanding working
skills but
Accept comma addition
skills, but
they will
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the process of the work by their negative communication skills and behave awfully with their colleagues which will slow the development and make problems in the company
as a result
not
healthy environment
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a healthy environment
.
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Have
have a bal
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internal to, involving members of (a group of people)
between
tween
all s
an ability that has been acquired by training
skills
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a worker who is hired to perform a job
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