In countries where there is a high rate of unemployment, most students should be offered only primary education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. Do you agree or disagree ?

Is relevant and true the affirmation that there is a lack of employment in some countries. These

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fact

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facts

is

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are

possible thought many factors, but does not need to be

associate

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associated

with the level of

education

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of the population. The economy, politic and wealth of

a

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an

individual country

should be investigate

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should investigate

should be investigated

as a primary cause of unemployment, and for that reason, it should be changed and improved. On my own point of view,

i

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I

disagree with the

fact

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that only the primary

education

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should be provide

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should be provided

for the students. In

fact

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,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

beliave

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that the

education

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is the main way to reduce the lack of

job

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opportunities, because it helps to create a better society, with higher levels of information and

knowloge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

. The politics

estragegies

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may need to be changed to offer more placements for students,

pherabes

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influenciating

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influencing

and

incentivating

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them to follow a professional career, with more rates of salary, good conditions of work and more chance to improve

economiclly

with respect to economic science

economically

in life. In conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

defend the

fact

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that the secondary

education

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helps the

population offering

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population, offering

them a better service,

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in the medical field. As a dentist,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

need to confirm that the highest level of

education

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, the highest quality of the service offered to a

pacient

a person who requires medical care

patient

. The concern about not find a

job

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should be replaced

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with

the question: how can the government

amplifie

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job

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opportunites

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

? I would say that the solution is change the mentality of the students making them more

holpfull

providing assistance or serving a useful function

helpful

and generate more space for the

youngs

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young

ones to find a

job

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that is

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similar with their

expectatives

regard something as probable or likely

expects

.