Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
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Many people feel that, in recent years, there is no correlation between the amount of knowledge required to perform a certain job, and the
salary
recieved
. conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
For example
, a surgeon working in the United States, studies 13 years in order to become fully qualified, and earns approximately 300,000 dollars a year. In contrast
, a famous actor, who did not study in
the University, earns well over a million dollars for a single movie. These differences, might prevent people form Suggestion
at
persuing
a analyze syntactically by assigning a constituent structure to (a sentence)
parsing
carees
in professions which our society is in desperate need, and so I agree with the statement given above.
There are many professions in our society, which are mandatory for us to maintain a functional community, and require long periods of studying. To illustrate, we require physicians and nurses, in order to sustain a functional health system. Suggestion
career
careers
Also
, we need teachers to educated
our children in schools. Because these Suggestion
educate
professions
are undervalued in a person engaged in one of the learned professions
professionals
comparisson
to others, the act of examining resemblances
comparison
such
as sportsman and actors, young people are unweeling
to pursue these careers and, as a not disposed or inclined toward
unwilling
consequences
, less manpower in these well needed professions. These changes Suggestion
consequence
has been shown
in a recent study done in Israel, which indicated a 10% decrease in the amount of medical students in the Suggestion
have been shown
last
threee
years, due to a 15% reduction in the average being one more than two
three
physicians
Suggestion
physician
salary
.
There are, in my poinion
, two main a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
pinion
criterias
which can be used in order to assess appropriate a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
salary
. First
, I believe salary
should be directly related to the amount of years required to become fully educated in a given profession. According to this
criteria, Universitiy
professors and medical doctors the body of faculty and students at a university
university
for example
, which studied well over ten years, whould
earn more than a teacher who studied for 3 years. expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
Second
, salary
should be given according to the goverments
and community needs. To illustrate, computer engineers which are needed by the industry much more than actors the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
whould
be paid more, because it will encourage people to become engineers and, as a consequence, improve the economical situation.
In conclusion, I agree with the above statement, and think people should be paid according to their education and society's need. Like expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
this
we will be able to direct people to the professions we, as a community, need.Submitted by chilafp on
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