Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

Many people feel that, in recent years, there is no correlation between the amount of knowledge required to perform a certain job, and the

salary

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recieved

conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers

received

.

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, a surgeon working in the United States, studies 13 years in order to become fully qualified, and earns approximately 300,000 dollars a year.

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, a famous actor, who did not study

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the University, earns well over a million dollars for a single movie. These differences, might prevent people form

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career

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in professions which our society is in desperate need, and so I agree with the statement given above. There are many professions in our society, which are mandatory for us to maintain a functional community, and require long periods of studying. To illustrate, we require physicians and nurses, in order to sustain a functional health system.

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, we need teachers to

educated

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educate

our children in schools. Because these

professions

a person engaged in one of the learned professions

professionals

are undervalued in

comparisson

the act of examining resemblances

comparison

to others,

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as sportsman and actors, young people are

unweeling

not disposed or inclined toward

unwilling

to pursue these careers and, as a

consequences

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consequence

, less manpower in these well needed professions. These changes

has been shown

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have been shown

in a recent study done in Israel, which indicated a 10% decrease in the amount of medical students in the

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being one more than two

three

years, due to a 15% reduction in the average

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physician

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. There are, in my

poinion

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

pinion

, two main

criterias

a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

criteria

which can be used in order to assess appropriate

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, I believe

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should be directly related to the amount of years required to become fully educated in a given profession. According to

this

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criteria,

Universitiy

the body of faculty and students at a university

university

professors and medical doctors

for example

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, which studied well over ten years,

whould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

would

earn more than a teacher who studied for 3 years.

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,

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should be given according to the

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government's

and community needs. To illustrate, computer engineers which are needed by the industry much more than actors

whould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

would

be paid more, because it will encourage people to become engineers and, as a consequence, improve the economical situation. In conclusion, I agree with the above statement, and think people should be paid according to their education and society's need. Like

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we will be able to direct people to the professions we, as a community, need.