Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. -How far do you agree? -What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?

Many people feel that, in recent years, there is no correlation between the amount of knowledge required to perform a certain job, and the
salary
recieved
conforming to the established language usage of educated native speakers
received
.
For example
, a surgeon working in the United States, studies 13 years in order to become fully qualified, and earns approximately 300,000 dollars a year.
In contrast
, a famous actor, who did not study
in
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at
the University, earns well over a million dollars for a single movie. These differences, might prevent people form
persuing
analyze syntactically by assigning a constituent structure to (a sentence)
parsing
a
carees
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career
careers
in professions which our society is in desperate need, and so I agree with the statement given above. There are many professions in our society, which are mandatory for us to maintain a functional community, and require long periods of studying. To illustrate, we require physicians and nurses, in order to sustain a functional health system.
Also
, we need teachers to
educated
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educate
our children in schools. Because these
professions
a person engaged in one of the learned professions
professionals
are undervalued in
comparisson
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to others,
such
as sportsman and actors, young people are
unweeling
not disposed or inclined toward
unwilling
to pursue these careers and, as a
consequences
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consequence
, less manpower in these well needed professions. These changes
has been shown
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have been shown
in a recent study done in Israel, which indicated a 10% decrease in the amount of medical students in the
last
threee
being one more than two
three
years, due to a 15% reduction in the average
physicians
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physician
salary
. There are, in my
poinion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
pinion
, two main
criterias
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
criteria
which can be used in order to assess appropriate
salary
.
First
, I believe
salary
should be directly related to the amount of years required to become fully educated in a given profession. According to
this
criteria,
Universitiy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
professors and medical doctors
for example
, which studied well over ten years,
whould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
earn more than a teacher who studied for 3 years.
Second
,
salary
should be given according to the
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
and community needs. To illustrate, computer engineers which are needed by the industry much more than actors
whould
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
would
be paid more, because it will encourage people to become engineers and, as a consequence, improve the economical situation. In conclusion, I agree with the above statement, and think people should be paid according to their education and society's need. Like
this
we will be able to direct people to the professions we, as a community, need.
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