You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter introduce yourself explain the problem and state what action you would like from the company

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Nidhi Mehta and I am one of your regular customers. I am writing

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letter to report on faulty

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which I purchased from your Marine Line shop

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Tuesday. On Tuesday, the 6th of August, I visited your shop to purchase a

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. With the help of your

staff

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I purchased Samsung 42’

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and was assured that it is one of the best

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in the market.

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, when I got home, I was surprised to find that not only

remote

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the remote

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had

issue

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an issue

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, but even the picture quality was not satisfactory, to be precise it was blurry. I immediately lodged

complaint

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a complaint

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with your customer

server

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service

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on the same day and was conveyed that

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will be fixed or replaced in 24hours. I am very disappointed to inform

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you that

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this

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has not happened and I have not received any

further

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updates since

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. I am extremely dissatisfied not only with the product

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but even with the customer service support. I hope that

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problem will be addressed immediately. I expect to receive a replacement of

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current

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the current

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issue get fixed within a day. I look forward to hearing back from you immediately. Yours faithfully, Nidhi Sarvaiya

Fri Aug 16 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

205 words

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