You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, Explain that you would like to apply for the job Give some details of any relevant experience that you have Specify the date and times that would suit you.

Dear Sir/ Ma, I am writing to express my interest in the part-time job you recently advertised in The Punch Newspaper. I will like to apply for the position of
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chef in your organisation.
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, I have attached a detailed
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Vitae to provide you with necessary information about my career. Over the years, I have worked for big hotels as a chef and
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have over five years' experience in the food industry. My specialization is
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African Cuisine which I do quite well and will like to be considered for the job. I was
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part of the team that catered for the president during the luncheon held at The White House.
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I would have loved to work full time,
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since the job is specifically for a
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position
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will love to work on Mondays,
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and Weekends.
Furthermore
, I would
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prefer the night shift. I look forward to a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Opeyemi Mabel.
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